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[Lyrics] Hold Me Back Freestyle || 143. || 2nd Freestyle || Leave Feedback!! || - Conjuration - Apr 19, 2013
Okay, well I thought I would throw together another project.
I take no credit for the instrumental. This is the instrumental from 'Hold Me Back' by Rick Ross.
As always, lyrics are under the Soundcloud link! Thanks to all who listen and leave comments.
Link: Hold Me Back Freestyle - 143.
I look in the mirror
my reflection looks scared
with the fear in my eyes
and tears that ive spared
it was a love once lost
and a love never found
my heart once broken
yet I stand renowned
You can take my life
forever live my soul
I'll reunite with my dad
and let death take its toll
the corruption within
the taxes we spend
The media blowing up
Like the Boston Marathon did.
Inside I feel hate
but who is to blame
I only speak the truth
and put the lies to shame
I asked god for forgiveness
but he never came
They said he'd answer my prayers
He never even mentioned my name
I thought I had gotten my chance
but my sins stay the same
My rage grew inside
something you can not tame
a loss of love inside
dark hatred it became
The lies and the abuse
the hell I overcame
They say each his own
and I is who I proclaim
no where near perfect
but I keep the fuel to the flame
I speak from the heart
no reguards for the fame
Love is my weapon
143 is my name.
My mind takes time
my heart speaks words
My past tells a story
Now I hope you heard
I can tell it all day
and no one be concerned
but when I leave this earth
I hope it's love that you learned
143.
* - Delevingne - Apr 19, 2013
Pretty good, nice to listen to. :)
Keep it up browski.
"The media blowing up
Like the Boston Marathon did."
* - Conjuration - Apr 19, 2013
That means a lot man! Thanks. :)
And yeah. I couldn't resist. ;)
* - Lesson - Apr 19, 2013
Bro, you said "full" instead of "fuel" in this verse:
"but I keep the fuel to the flame"
* - Conjuration - Apr 19, 2013
I realize I messed up. xD
My tongue refused to let me say fuel, but oh well.
I had to re-record like 3 times and honestly felt no need to re-do it again xD
* - Lesson - Apr 19, 2013
(Apr 19, 2013 12:42 PM)143. Wrote: I realize I messed up. xD
My tongue refused to let me say fuel, but oh well.
I had to re-record like 3 times and honestly felt no need to re-do it again xD
Yeah I gotcha buddy :)
Nice work, keep it up.
* - Conjuration - Apr 20, 2013
Thanks a lot man! :)
Thanks for the listen.
* - Conjuration - Apr 22, 2013
Looking for constructive feedback! Thanks :3
* - Cocaine Musik - Apr 22, 2013
Nice man, you got the voice, but do you got the heatrock?
* - Tsunade - Apr 22, 2013
Sounds more like "Epic Rap Battles of History". Nice lyrics, you just gotta learn how to deliver speech on time with your thinking pattern.
Check me out:
* - Conjuration - Apr 22, 2013
Thank you guys for the feedback!
Much appreciated.
* - Steve Prefontaine - Apr 22, 2013
The lyrics are great. I agree though once you perfect your delivery it will be fire. With time the flow of the lyrics will get better too.
* - Conjuration - Apr 22, 2013
(Apr 22, 2013 09:09 PM)Steve Prefontaine Wrote: The lyrics are great. I agree though once you perfect your delivery it will be fire. With time the flow of the lyrics will get better too.
Means a lot. Appreciate that.
I have been told that I have a way with words, just not too open with my voice.
* - Steve Prefontaine - Apr 22, 2013
(Apr 22, 2013 09:11 PM)143. Wrote: Means a lot. Appreciate that.
I have been told that I have a way with words, just not too open with my voice.
It's good just rap it with confidence and you can get that flow down.
Off topic: Nice name haha!
* - Conjuration - Apr 22, 2013
(Apr 22, 2013 09:14 PM)Steve Prefontaine Wrote: It's good just rap it with confidence and you can get that flow down.
Off topic: Nice name haha!
Thank you sir!
And nice usergroup! ;)