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Complexity D&D - Wireframe - SIM-1179616 - Mar 2, 2014
The D&D sector of complexity has a project going, and we've been working on some wireframes for the landing page.
take 4 (Click to View)
![[Image: K3caB8d.png]](https://i.imgur.com/K3caB8d.png)
take 3 (Click to View)
![[Image: AWVfffw.png]](https://i.imgur.com/AWVfffw.png)
take 2 (Click to View)
![[Image: fe6njTw.png]](https://i.imgur.com/fe6njTw.png)
take 1 (Click to View)
![[Image: SrkK4Co.png]](https://i.imgur.com/SrkK4Co.png)
* - xhflhkeuhwguu34 - Mar 2, 2014
https://puu.sh/7gk4v.png & https://puu.sh/7gk8S.png <= Looks funny imo
You should change the webcam color
* - SIM-1179616 - Mar 2, 2014
(Mar 2, 2014 11:08 AM)Xen0n Wrote: https://puu.sh/7gk4v.png & https://puu.sh/7gk8S.png <= Looks funny imo
You should change the webcam color
Webcam color was just from the mockup I grabbed. It's just a general layout.
The green button at the bottom.. I'm not seeing it.
The blue placeholder at the top, I need to make it a bit bigger I think. That's where the logo would be.
Thanks for the input, I'll work on the details.
* - spidermat1 - Mar 2, 2014
Very basic and simple, but I like simple so there you go :D
* - xhflhkeuhwguu34 - Mar 2, 2014
I thought the alignment on that button was off, sorry.
* - SIM-1179616 - Mar 2, 2014
(Mar 2, 2014 11:16 AM)Xen0n Wrote: I thought the alignment on that button was off, sorry.
Oh, okay. Now I see it. I'll get that fixed up.
* - Fabric - Mar 2, 2014
that looks good man i like it good work
* - +Aether - Mar 2, 2014
You don't leave enough space on the sides, your elements aren't properly aligned, and your rounded rectangles just look ugly (use non-rounded rectangles next time). It's overall a pretty average design, but you fail to pay attention to the details (inconsistent spacing between elements, failure to properly align elements, etc.)
I'm currently too busy to do this, but I can point out exactly which parts of your design are wrong and why later (just chat me on Skype).
* - SIM-1179616 - Mar 2, 2014
(Mar 2, 2014 01:05 PM)+Aether Wrote: You don't leave enough space on the sides, your elements aren't properly aligned, and your rounded rectangles just look ugly (use non-rounded rectangles next time). It's overall a pretty average design, but you fail to pay attention to the details (inconsistent spacing between elements, failure to properly align elements, etc.)
I'm currently too busy to do this, but I can point out exactly which parts of your design are wrong and why later (just chat me on Skype).
I didn't need to leave space on the sides, I'm using a grid psd.. the colors would expand to the entire screen on the actual design.
A couple of my elements had very minor alignment issues which I've resolved, however 90% of them are exactly where they are supposed to be. I've been counting pixels.
The rounded boxes is completely your opinion, and one I have to disagree with in this case.
I have however messaged you on skype and will gladly take any help you would like to offer when you decide to come online.
* - Isaac Newton - Mar 2, 2014
Needs more whitespace in my opinion.
What grid are you following?
What will be the third last field? And I'm assuming Macbook/iMAC etc are placeholders.
* - SIM-1179616 - Mar 2, 2014
(Mar 2, 2014 02:02 PM)Isaac Newton Wrote: Needs more whitespace in my opinion.
What grid are you following?
What will be the third last field? And I'm assuming Macbook/iMAC etc are placeholders.
I've put as much content as possible in it, there will be a bit more room in the finished design.
Bootstrap grid.
Username, email and probably display name. I might make it only two fields. Yes, they are placeholders
* - Graffworld - Mar 2, 2014
the elements would look better with a 25px radius instead of the halfway between 0 and 25 it looks awkward. there are some consistency issues near the bottom div and the overrall design has consistency issues concerning the size of each element maybe something more dark for the navbar instead of the bright vibrant colors used considering the theme is d&d?
* - SIM-1179616 - Mar 2, 2014
(Mar 2, 2014 02:15 PM)Graffworld Wrote: the elements would look better with a 25px radius instead of the halfway between 0 and 25 it looks awkward. there are some consistency issues near the bottom div and the overrall design has consistency issues concerning the size of each element maybe something more dark for the navbar instead of the bright vibrant colors used considering the theme is d&d?
Yeah, I did use a weird radius, not changing it now. Will note for next time.
I see the alignment issues you noted, I must of missed them earlier. I'll fix them.
D&D = Design and Development, not Dungeons and Dragons. It's the landing page for a web app.