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Opinions? Thread design for upcoming ebook. - nuclearcmd - Mar 20, 2016 * - Saint - Mar 20, 2016 I kinda like the header, but i dislike the rest, the font is not good, the design is to blocky ish made, change it up. * - NieR - Mar 20, 2016 Way too plain. The animation for the mouse is too choppy and there's too much empty space which instills a boring design. The bitcoin and paypal logo do not blend with the background at all, just make them white. I'd also recommend revising your thread dimensions, it's too much to look at. * - TorTorTorTorTor - Mar 31, 2016 Hi, I'm a graphic designer and have been awarded a scholarship to the UK's top design school, here is my review: Love the header. I would regulate the size of all the boxes on the header text, there are about 5 different line thicknesses and the 'terms and conditions' box is completly improportionate, this would make the design consistent. No box is needed around the listed T&C's as they are not a header text. Same with 'price' remove the box around that and leave one just on the $10. To help the bitcoin and PayPal logo blend I would fill them white; so they match your colour scheme. Maybe also try having the scroll gif inbetween two boxes so half is black and white, therfore not haing to take up a large proportion of the design just for form. The purchase button is certainly bold but I would make it slightly less prominant. I would also move the 'Price' block above the 'purchase', and the 'T&C's' below the 'purchase' block to achieve a more sensical flow making it easier to find the right information. Hope some of that was useful, Tor * - prada ⠀ - Mar 31, 2016 really inconsistent layout bland colors, no type uniform and a ridiculous amount of negative space in the header for no reason * - Homesick - Apr 1, 2016 Looks too boring, also a few spelling errors; "don't" and "redistribution". Maybe add a bit of colour, and why is the header so large?