Just made my first practice thread

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Just made my first practice thread - Snapchatme - Jun 5, 2016

So this took some time so be nice I never used adobe photoshop cs6 until please tell me what I can add and what I can remove.
[Image: VPT20RF.jpg]

* - Arcrimonia - Jun 5, 2016

I would use a different font as well as changing some of the colors around, but it is not too bad for your first attempt at a thread design.

* - sʜᴀʏ - Jun 5, 2016

The colors don't really add up nor does the fonts. The thread is also very tiny and what with the white thing at the bottom?
However you'll get better the more you practice, if you need any type of help with designing send me a pm and i'll help you out.

* - Zeke - Jun 5, 2016

Let's start with spelling Introduction correct, using simpler fonts and putting colors that don't blind others (such as that blue)

* - Misery - Jun 5, 2016

I think you should start off by matching the colours properly, and choosing another font.
Then you should start considering sizing, use of icons and general details.

* - Snapchatme - Jun 5, 2016

(Jun 5, 2016 05:11 AM)Shay Mitchell Wrote: The colors don't really add up nor does the fonts. The thread is also very tiny and what with the white thing at the bottom?
However you'll get better the more you practice, if you need any type of help with designing send me a pm and i'll help you out.

thanks for the feedback :) helps

(Jun 5, 2016 08:26 AM)Delusional Wrote: I think you should start off by matching the colours properly, and choosing another font.
Then you should start considering sizing, use of icons and general details.

Thanks for the feedhelp i will put that into consideration

* - Millionare - Jun 5, 2016

I like it. You already have the basic concept down. I feel like you can make parts fade and blend into each other a little bbit better. For example, that neon blue-ish box at the bottom could be a little bit more blended into the surrounding area, so that everything looks like one big design, rather than individual pieces put together. You could also experiment with other fonts. Other than that great job, keep up the good work!

* - big blunt - Jun 6, 2016

Hi, i would change the colors, pink and blue don´t fit so good together. Maybe use another form of box in the price section. But keep working on this my friend!
Have a great day :)

* - JesusIsTheWayEveryday - Jun 8, 2016

Very simple looks like you could use practice but that is obvious, good job for your first time.