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Rate this shitty Vector Art - Motusora - Oct 20, 2016
made this within 30 mins to 1 hour . forgot the exact time i started 🤣 ..
critiques and comments are welcome !! 🤝
kindly rate this guys !!!
![[Image: JmsQU6D.jpg]](https://i.imgur.com/JmsQU6D.jpg)
https://i.imgur.com/JmsQU6D.jpg
* - Inked ๖ۣۜFeather - Oct 20, 2016
Shitty/10
Jk I like it a lot. It's almost pop art or something, but more unique and 'you'
Keep at it, and I wish you the best of luck with your store
* - problems.x - Oct 20, 2016
I honestly don't mind it it looks good. It's only the lips that doesn't look very "to scale/realistic" but other than that, good job!
* - Inked ๖ۣۜFeather - Oct 20, 2016
(Oct 20, 2016 01:29 AM)Incapability Wrote: I honestly don't mind it it looks good. It's only the lips that doesn't look very "to scale/realistic" but other than that, good job!
I thought they looked okay if you imagine she is that hoe that played Laura Croft
Abjelina Joleine or something
* - problems.x - Oct 20, 2016
(Oct 20, 2016 01:30 AM)Inked ๖ۣۜFeather Wrote: I thought they looked okay if you imagine she is that hoe that played Laura Croft
Abjelina Joleine or something
it's only the top bit of the lip for me dude, the bit that has like a perfect curve xd
* - Inked ๖ۣۜFeather - Oct 20, 2016
(Oct 20, 2016 01:31 AM)Incapability Wrote: it's only the top bit of the lip for me dude, the bit that has like a perfect curve xd
Ah
Now that you've said that I see it. Needs to be a little less 'sharp'- I see what he tried to do, but he needs to curve it a little bit more
* - problems.x - Oct 20, 2016
(Oct 20, 2016 01:36 AM)Inked ๖ۣۜFeather Wrote: Ah
Now that you've said that I see it. Needs to be a little less 'sharp'- I see what he tried to do, but he needs to curve it a little bit more
yeah my dude, other than that tiny little bit it looks amazing, i guess im being fussy lmao, but great work OP!
* - Motusora - Oct 20, 2016
(Oct 20, 2016 01:41 AM)Incapability Wrote: yeah my dude, other than that tiny little bit it looks amazing, i guess im being fussy lmao, but great work OP!
haha thank you 🤝
* - jb3434343 - Oct 20, 2016
If I need such graphics, I would order from you. Once I needed to vectorize images for playing cards - I spent a lot of time looking for something like this. If you keep on your style and develop it properly - it could be very cool.
* - Motusora - Oct 20, 2016
(Oct 20, 2016 07:54 AM)jb3434343 Wrote: If I need such graphics, I would order from you. Once I needed to vectorize images for playing cards - I spent a lot of time looking for something like this. If you keep on your style and develop it properly - it could be very cool.
I'll look forward into doing business with you soon 🤝.
* - YinYang - Oct 21, 2016
I know what you're going with with the cut from person to vector,
but it doesn't work in this case
The work itself is really nice, you've got hair spot on and your shading is really good
* - 2073436 - Oct 21, 2016
overall, it looks pretty shitty
my eyes don't like it
* - darkfenopro - Oct 21, 2016
Looks really nice OP maybe one day you could make some good money doing this
* - NieR - Oct 21, 2016
The lips really ruin this because they just don't look right due to how sharp they are. You seem like you're trying to emit the idea of realism with shadows but you fall flat due to how you don't show case shading on the sides of the nose which makes the girl's nose looks flat. Everything else is done fine but because you didn't include the rest of her head I'm imagining this girl to have a bald head. Whenever you do a profile/portrait of someone's head you always include the entire head down to at least the top of the shoulders otherwise you're swaying the viewer in terms of composition.
I'd recommend just going back to this and refining it as right now it doesn't look very good.
* - Motusora - Oct 21, 2016
(Oct 21, 2016 01:08 PM)Slayed Wrote: The lips really ruin this because they just don't look right due to how sharp they are. You seem like you're trying to emit the idea of realism with shadows but you fall flat due to how you don't show case shading on the sides of the nose which makes the girl's nose looks flat. Everything else is done fine but because you didn't include the rest of her head I'm imagining this girl to have a bald head. Whenever you do a profile/portrait of someone's head you always include the entire head down to at least the top of the shoulders otherwise you're swaying the viewer in terms of composition.
I'd recommend just going back to this and refining it as right now it doesn't look very good.
yeah , thank you for this wonderful comment . 🤝