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Simple Presentation for my Girlfriend - Motusora - Nov 8, 2016
i was kinda busy these past few weeks and barely have time for her so i decided to make this to surprise her.
![[Image: zdeVryO.jpg]](https://i.imgur.com/zdeVryO.jpg)
i printed it in a A3 size Photopaper.
sorry for the bad quality image 🤭
( the design was different from the first pic since i did a little changes before i uploaded it. )
![[Image: SEOTDMn.jpg]](https://i.imgur.com/SEOTDMn.jpg)
kindly rate this fellow HF users .
critiques and comments are welcome !!! 🤝
* - NieR - Nov 8, 2016
The lips seem a little flat (add shading above lip) and the left eye looks abnormal due to the positioning of the elliptical line over it (just move it down like you have it on the right eye). I'd personally go into more tonal depth with a portrait but I'm sure she'll appreciate this either way.
* - Ink7 - Nov 8, 2016
I think you should get rid of the effects you put on after printing it.
I think the cleaner image looks much better.
* - Motusora - Nov 8, 2016
(Nov 8, 2016 08:45 AM)Slayed Wrote: The lips seem a little flat (add shading above lip) and the left eye looks abnormal due to the positioning of the elliptical line over it (just move it down like you have it on the right eye). I'd personally go into more tonal depth with a portrait but I'm sure she'll appreciate this either way.thanks for that detailed comment mate , appreciate it .
(Nov 8, 2016 12:16 PM)Nuance Wrote: I think you should get rid of the effects you put on after printing it.
I think the cleaner image looks much better.
hehe, that cleaner image (regardless of the bad camera) was already in her position mate .
thanks for the comment 🤝