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No ratings, more criticism - The Kraken - Feb 15, 2017
hello people,
So I made this thread design for my account shop a week ago or so. I know it is not that special and not that much to see. But what do you think of it? I know some small details about the thread design is not good, as the line (above and beneath). I would like to hear some criticism (good and bad points). What could be better. Thanks for your time looking and reading.
Thread Design:
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![[Image: thread_sales.png]](https://image.ibb.co/dCxqTv/thread_sales.png)
* - Wolverine - Feb 15, 2017
It looks better than most account shop's at the non-free accounts sections, it's simple, I like it.
* - The Kraken - Feb 15, 2017
(Feb 15, 2017 12:45 PM)Movies Wrote: It looks better than most account shop's at the non-free accounts sections, it's simple, I like it.
Thanks for your reply, I apreaciate it. Do you also see some negative points on the design? If so let me know, else, thanks for your reply.
* - James Burnham - Feb 15, 2017
The transparency in the white circle would look better if it was at 75% so the logo can stand out more easily.
* - Cοrrupt - Feb 15, 2017
The liquid effect looks too artificial, try sprucing it up with some PS brushes.
The footer contains two things, contact and payment, they aren't separated which makes it unappealing and cluttered, would separate those two things into little sections of their own.
The top of the design says
"The Kraken"
"Account Shop"
Again, looks a little cluttered, try separating those two or combining them into one.
All the critiscm I have for this piece, really is nice with the exception of the above points.
* - The Kraken - Feb 15, 2017
(Feb 15, 2017 12:49 PM)Mr. Burnham Wrote: The transparency in the white circle would look better if it was at 75% so the logo can stand out more easily.
Yes I already tought somethin similiar. Thanks for the input man apreaciate it.
(Feb 15, 2017 12:53 PM)Corrupt_Spaghetti Wrote: The liquid effect looks too artificial, try sprucing it up with some PS brushes.That is what I was looking for, thanks for your reply man!
The footer contains two things, contact and payment, they aren't separated which makes it unappealing and cluttered, would separate those two things into little sections of their own.
The top of the design says
"The Kraken"
"Account Shop"
Again, looks a little cluttered, try separating those two or combining them into one.
All the critiscm I have for this piece, really is nice with the exception of the above points.
* - chr9ped - Feb 15, 2017
The only thing I dislike is the background on the League of Legends dots. I just don't think they fit. I think grey would be more fitting. Idk.
Otherwise it is really cool!
* - The Kraken - Feb 15, 2017
(Feb 15, 2017 01:59 PM)chr9ped Wrote: The only thing I dislike is the background on the League of Legends dots. I just don't think they fit. I think grey would be more fitting. Idk.
Otherwise it is really cool!
Tbh I clicked on some random colors for those haha. Thanks for the input!
* - MrSniffles - Feb 15, 2017
Simple, clean, good color scheme, i say it's very nice.
One thing though, please move the bottom headers 14 px to the left so it's dead center :)
Other than that i shouldn't change it! Does the job with a nice clean look.
* - Nevieth - Feb 15, 2017
I like it, the colors are nice to look at, the fonts used are quite generic but it gets the job done. My main concern is why say "The Kraken" at the top left of the thread when it says "The Kraken" literally two inches lower?
Oh and what's the difference between the three League of Legends packages? Or are they just placeholders?
* - oRequiem - Feb 15, 2017
I like it.
It's unique with a color most threads don't have. =)
Stay unique 👍
* - The Kraken - Feb 16, 2017
(Feb 15, 2017 03:30 PM)MrSniffles Wrote: Simple, clean, good color scheme, i say it's very nice.
One thing though, please move the bottom headers 14 px to the left so it's dead center :)
Other than that i shouldn't change it! Does the job with a nice clean look.
thanks for your input, apreaciate it 🤝
(Feb 15, 2017 03:48 PM)Nevieth Wrote: I like it, the colors are nice to look at, the fonts used are quite generic but it gets the job done. My main concern is why say "The Kraken" at the top left of the thread when it says "The Kraken" literally two inches lower?
Oh and what's the difference between the three League of Legends packages? Or are they just placeholders?
For "The Kraken" above account shop, I have no idea why I did that to be honest. I agree with you, it shouldn't be there.
And for the LoL accounts, they were different regions so I picked random colors as background for the circles. Thanks for your input!
(Feb 15, 2017 06:06 PM)oRequiem Wrote: I like it.Thanks man, apreaciate the kind words!
It's unique with a color most threads don't have. =)
Stay unique 👍
* - rgiraldo - Feb 19, 2017
Maybe if you focus more on delivering a product and less on the design of your store then it will do better
* - Traum - Feb 19, 2017
I like it, but for a "simple" design use a thinner font. And it bugs me that private message etc. is without capital letters. I think it looks better if you begin with a capital letter.
* - ✍ TʜᴇIɴsᴘɪʀᴇᴅOɴᴇ - Feb 19, 2017
Pretty basic, not much to comment here other than these 2 bits:
- The kraken/octopus or w/e icon is pixelated, and kinda hurts my eyes.
- Although your payment methods are totally different elements from titles (CONTACT/PAYMENTS), they've got the same size. Decrease the size of "PM", "PP" & "BTC"!