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If all fails, can you succeed? - BRΞNDΞN - Mar 10, 2017
If all fails then can you succeed?
In the forest where everything bleeds
Where the cowards are on their knees
If all fails then can you succeed?
If the sun doesn't rise, is it day?
Another enters as another fades away
Where the bodies lie in decay
If the sun doesn't rise, is it day?
If you are broken, can you ever be fixed?
They tell you they can with all sorts of tricks
They feed you lies until you are sick
If you are broken, can you ever be fixed?
If all fails then can you succeed?
If one dies it will sprout it's seed
And others will shun it for it's need
If all fails then can you succeed?
* - Saint - Mar 10, 2017
If you wrote this then chappeau, it is a nice peice, hopefully i'll see some more of these little poem's of yours soon, have a good one.
* - BRΞNDΞN - Mar 10, 2017
(Mar 10, 2017 11:07 AM).Saint Wrote: If you wrote this then chappeau, it is a nice peice, hopefully i'll see some more of these little poem's of yours soon, have a good one.
Yes I did write it. I used to write a lot of poetry as sort of a time killer. One of the few things I've ever been decent at.
Will be writing more :) Thanks mate.
* - Kareem - Mar 10, 2017
Wow this is a great one :)
* - Angelus - Mar 10, 2017
Nice man
And holy fuck I didnt know they added this section here, been gone too long!!
Its time to make my return ;)
* - Prophet Banana - Mar 11, 2017
Gayest piece of writing I've ever read in my life.
Only people who'll like this are pretentious finger-snappers.
* - BRΞNDΞN - Mar 11, 2017
(Mar 11, 2017 07:23 AM)Prophet Banana Wrote: Gayest piece of writing I've ever read in my life.
Only people who'll like this are pretentious finger-snappers.
Accurate statement