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Rate My eSports Logo + Animation - jawsh33 - Apr 21, 2017
Everything made from 0. Spent around half an hour on the logo, kind of a noob with AE, so animation velocity was fked up. But yeah c:
Animation: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iDq9vqHRLxc
Logo: https://i.imgur.com/WnkIijg.jpg
* - Rotca - Apr 21, 2017
It's like, a 2 out of 10. Off center text, bad font, Bad color selection in terms of that dark navy blue on top of a cyan. The dark blue edges don't match up with the light blue background and overlaps it. Bad shading on dark blue layer.
If you're new to graphic design, then it's not horrible, but if you've been doing graphic design for a while, it's horrendous.
* - OrbitalData - Apr 21, 2017
I'll be honest since I believe the best type of feedback is to be honest. The animation in the video was extremely basic and poorly designed and orchestrated. The flow of the animation was poor and certain things moved too quickly and I didn't really understand what was occurring. I understand you are new to AE, so keep at it, watch more tutorials and mess around with different effects. Keep trying, practice will only result in better work!
* - jawsh33 - Apr 22, 2017
(Apr 21, 2017 05:56 PM)Rotca Wrote: It's like, a 2 out of 10. Off center text, bad font, Bad color selection in terms of that dark navy blue on top of a cyan. The dark blue edges don't match up with the light blue background and overlaps it. Bad shading on dark blue layer.
If you're new to graphic design, then it's not horrible, but if you've been doing graphic design for a while, it's horrendous.
Thanks for feedback. Fairly new at graphic design, only 16 years old.
(Apr 21, 2017 11:23 PM)OrbitalData Wrote: I'll be honest since I believe the best type of feedback is to be honest. The animation in the video was extremely basic and poorly designed and orchestrated. The flow of the animation was poor and certain things moved too quickly and I didn't really understand what was occurring. I understand you are new to AE, so keep at it, watch more tutorials and mess around with different effects. Keep trying, practice will only result in better work!
Appreciate the honesty, but the focus was mainly on the logo, not on the crappy animation I made.
* - ᴏracle - Apr 22, 2017
Both animation and logo look very clean, but what I personally would do, is change up the font to something more bold. Otherwise it looks very good
* - IDMDS - Apr 23, 2017
I keel it short for ya m8 to save you time.
NOT esports worthy in my opinion BUT graphs are deff very nicely done overall and would be a nice logo for something else
* - Deathy - Apr 23, 2017
(Apr 21, 2017 05:56 PM)Rotca Wrote: It's like, a 2 out of 10. Off center text, bad font, Bad color selection in terms of that dark navy blue on top of a cyan. The dark blue edges don't match up with the light blue background and overlaps it. Bad shading on dark blue layer.
If you're new to graphic design, then it's not horrible, but if you've been doing graphic design for a while, it's horrendous.
Very harsh review.
6/10 OP, I actually kind of like it.
* - Nitroscity - Apr 23, 2017
6/10
Make it symmetrical so it's easy on the eye
* - test - Apr 23, 2017
Animation feels a bit choppy, it could be a bit smoother for sure. 5/10 - not bad for half an hours work.
* - Veto - Apr 24, 2017
So basic and boring loooooooooooool
* - Yaws - Apr 25, 2017
It's pretty basic but if it's early work then you have potential.
* - Exitious - Apr 25, 2017
I do like the Logo, it is almost done. I think you could add a lil more to it, like a drop shadow or something, I'm not too sure. As for the intro, maybe consider paying a professional too make it that's what i did. The logo does look very cool and clean tho!!