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I met God in Malibu - BRΞNDΞN - May 23, 2017
I met a lady down in Malibu
Who told me I could see heaven, for a buck or two
I didn't believe my ears
But she washed over me, stripping all my fears
I met a wise man in Idaho
Who told me certain things, he learned long ago
I couldn't qute believe my ears
But one second he was with me, other he wasn't here
And I'm not gonna crack, I'm not gonna crack
When the whole world's turning it's back
And I'm not gonna break, not gonna break
When all I got is all I take
Pulling splinters, out of my fingers
I met myself in a mirror
I wiped the glass with piss, not any clearer
I scratched the vinyl again
Hanging like a chandelier like all of my friends
I met my personality
In someone's burned down, old apple tree
I thought I saw a light
But I blinded myself, it was too bright
And I'm not gonna crack, I'm not gonna crack
When the whole world's turning it's back
And I'm not gonna break, not gonna break
When all I got is all I take
Pulling splinters, out of my fingers
And I'm not gonna breathe, not gonne breathe
Planting chemicals, huffing seeds
And I'm not gonna need, not gonna need
Anything when I off and feed
Pulling splinters, out of my eyes
Holy men, don't say much
If you listen through a deaf man's ears
All of them, my guardian
Drowning in a bucket of tears
My child, I'm a bastard
But I know love is not what you're after
Oven burning, all my sincerity
Softly spoken, throughout humility
* - James Burnham - May 23, 2017
Right in the feels. You 're talented.
* - kookur - May 23, 2017
Why don't you make rap songs and sell to rappers bro? Or make ebooks of your poems and sell on Amazon? You write very good poems :)
* - Darkwin - May 23, 2017
This is beautiful, Can you please make this track?
* - Trappy - May 23, 2017
Anyone else read this in the speed of I spoke to the devil in miami?
* - Darkwin - May 23, 2017
(May 23, 2017 10:03 PM)Gianni Versace Wrote: Anyone else read this in the speed of I spoke to the devil in miami?
Omg this is so true, Now that i think about it i could see where the influence came from.
Awesome nevertheless.
* - Tоkki - May 23, 2017
I try and try to build my fort of gold,
my time is short, soon I will be old,
"never look back in anger" they say to me,
I don't listen to saying, I just keep being ME,
and all the people in the world that hates me,
the richer my life get,
the more they chase me,
You won't ever hear me spitting rhymes relating,
doing crimes,
skipping bail,
Keep my "street cred" by doing some time in jail,
I'm not gonna act like I'm bad,
if I ain't,
surely not a saint,
I am what I am,
and who I am is a mystery,
think about that,
when you're done it will be history,
cause everyone wants a piece of the cake,
the cake that I ate
but I'm not done,
so spare me some,
cause I will never leave this throne,
I will look down,
and thrown you a bone,
cause I'm in the zone, claiming that microphone,
telling people exactly how I feel,
too bad people get mad,
when things gets a little "too real",
they cant handle the truth,
is what I often hear,
I'm starting to believe it, cause the truth is rare,
people are crying and screaming in pain,
we used to lock people like that up,
humanity,
nsane,
different methods to try to treat their pain,
but they're all the same,
and I will claim,
we are born today,
and we are MADE insane,
doctors giving you something that a horse wouldn't eat,
medication,
stipulation, allegation,
free me from this world,
put me in a fairy-tale, give me my princess,
my ass is soar,
from all the kisses,
I swear one day I will scream out loud,
there's something wrong with this world,
let's here it for the crowd.
* - BRΞNDΞN - May 23, 2017
(May 23, 2017 10:06 PM)Darkwin Wrote: Omg this is so true, Now that i think about it i could see where the influence came from.
Awesome nevertheless.
I have actually never listened to that song before. This poem was more inspired by an early 90's grungish style.
(May 23, 2017 10:02 PM)Darkwin Wrote: This is beautiful, Can you please make this track?
Nobody wants to hear my voice, trust me