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XXXTentacion Cartoon - Windows - Jul 19, 2017
Hey guys, made a cartoon of X, let me know what you think as I am new to making GFX and this was my first cartoon.
It took me around 1.5 hours to make it looks kinda nice to me.
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![[Image: KWTb75t.png]](https://i.imgur.com/KWTb75t.png)
* - Umoran - Jul 19, 2017
It looks nice but you could have added the tattoos and he woulda looked a lot more like xxx, other than that, good job!
* - Windows - Jul 19, 2017
(Jul 19, 2017 11:30 PM)Umoran Wrote: It looks nice but you could have added the tattoos and he woulda looked a lot more like xxx, other than that, good job!
Yeah tattoos would have been a bit hard though, thanks man! ✌
* - buur - Jul 19, 2017
Looks pretty decent, but I agree with the tattoos.
Keep up the work
* - AvessoVision - Jul 20, 2017
Would recommend reading some tutorials or brief basic information about your software tools before proceeding any further.
For an hour and a half, that is really hard to believe it took you that long for a piece looking like a maximum of 10 minutes. Yes, it is that bad. There's no need in going around the corner just to please your ears and not make any progress through your graphic journey. It needs basic shaping with Pen Tool over the original image.
Take this tutorial and please follow it step by step and take your time. You will learn a lot more from it then you would on your own at the moment.
Post your next work from that tutorial and you might see some improvement if you take your time with it.
* - Windows - Jul 20, 2017
(Jul 20, 2017 02:33 AM)AvessoVision Wrote: Would recommend reading some tutorials or brief basic information about your software tools before proceeding any further.
For an hour and a half, that is really hard to believe it took you that long for a piece looking like a maximum of 10 minutes. Yes, it is that bad. There's no need in going around the corner just to please your ears and not make any progress through your graphic journey. It needs basic shaping with Pen Tool over the original image.
Take this tutorial and please follow it step by step and take your time. You will learn a lot more from it then you would on your own at the moment.
Post your next work from that tutorial and you might see some improvement if you take your time with it.
Yeah it's shit, but how do you get better with pen tool because when I use it and stuff it doesn't create 100% straight lines and i'm using my mouse.
* - AvessoVision - Jul 20, 2017
(Jul 20, 2017 08:36 AM)Ɯιηɗσωѕ Wrote: Yeah it's shit, but how do you get better with pen tool because when I use it and stuff it doesn't create 100% straight lines and i'm using my mouse.
You follow the image lines and you can also hold Alt while drawing the lines to control or to edit the next anchor point.
* - Elitas - Jul 20, 2017
Aim to make it look like this:
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![[Image: flat,800x800,070,f.u3.jpg]](https://ih1.redbubble.net/image.343126501.6408/flat,800x800,070,f.u3.jpg)
* - ᴏracle - Jul 22, 2017
this looks alright but most of the colour is outside of the lines, and it just looks messy