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Give me FAT Feedback - Faith Connors - May 30, 2018

I want the fattest feedback you can give me on my site.
I'm using visual composer for most of this and it's working quite nicely, but I feel like there are definitely things that are off about the site. I just can't seem to put my finger on it, or at least what could make it better.
That's why I need your help. Rip my design to shreds, tell me what needs to be glassed. I want this to look absolutely beautiful.
Don't forget to tell me what looks pretty, I do need the ego boost every now and then too :)

NOTE: Focus on design, I'm going to rewrite some of the content anyway, as well as add more pages to the navigation part (tos, privacy policy, etc.)

Linky linky: http://unaffiliated.ink
(Cloudflare is propagating, https should be up in the next day.)

RE: Give me FAT Feedback - Snappsh - May 30, 2018

its nice and simple but I think you can make it nicer to your niche/subject, as you are a writer I think you should make it more homely with a shop so users can buy directly and request work/upload work through a portal.

If you need some help HMU.

RE: Give me FAT Feedback - Faith Connors - Jun 7, 2018

bumpbumpbump
in regards to above, i dont like the ecommerce option as i like to talk about the job im taking on. i'm a single person, not a company of ten. i can't afford to take like 5 jobs at once on top of my fulltime. i need to be able to talk to people to work out what they want, a simple email doesn't actually cut it. turning down work isn't a huge rarity (albeit still pretty uncommon, but i've done it a few times.)

so ye, not throwing woocommerce on this B lmao

RE: Give me FAT Feedback - cSharpbruh - Jun 8, 2018

I simply don't like the design, it doesnt really have any professional feeling at all.

- Also i would change the font in your menu because its not very appealing, and kinda childish.
- You need to work on your Scaling, and your ratios.
- Your segmentation is really bad and not SEO friendly.
- Why is your whole sites text centered, makes no sense as you are appealing to "writing" services, and also bigger chunks of text should be aligned left - basic UX stuff.
- You need some call to action since you are trying to promote a service, and with the current state, most people would find another provider.

I would remake everything basicly, do a wireframe, then a mock-up and then build the site.
- Take a look at your competition, or atleast some modern sites, and get some ideas.

I would simply give this site 3/10.

RE: Give me FAT Feedback - Ganja - Jun 8, 2018

(Jun 8, 2018 12:24 PM)cSharpbruh Wrote:  I simply don't like the design, it doesnt really have any professional feeling at all.

- Also i would change the font in your menu because its not very appealing, and kinda childish.
- You need to work on your Scaling, and your ratios.
- Your segmentation is really bad and not SEO friendly.
- Why is your whole sites text centered, makes no sense as you are appealing to "writing" services, and also bigger chunks of text should be aligned left - basic UX stuff.
- You need some call to action since you are trying to promote a service, and with the current state, most people would find another provider.

I would remake everything basicly, do a wireframe, then a mock-up and then build the site.
- Take a look at your competition, or atleast some modern sites, and get some ideas.

I would simply give this site 3/10.

Started making a review about individual parts about it (wrong icon set, wrong spacing, wrong color combo's), but on second thought, I totally agree with this user's reply.

Edit: something positive: I like the green/black-grey combo on hover in the sidebar.

RE: Give me FAT Feedback - Copywriter - Jun 8, 2018

I like your writing skills, but your site does not seem to match it.

Change font, and color, as well as layout.

RE: Give me FAT Feedback - Muddy - Jun 8, 2018

I care more about what I'm buying than the site design. Look at that pricing! Matter of fact, I'll be contacting you soon for some work. I've actually been looking for a content writer. How busy are you usually?

RE: Give me FAT Feedback - Hᴇxᴀɢᴏɴ - Jun 15, 2018

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