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Feedback on my first thread design - 4rm00rl4t - Apr 3, 2020

Hi!
I just finished designing my first thread design and I would really appreciate some tips or pointers regarding the design! :)

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Took a bit of inspiration from Nirys Designs, as I really enjoyed his work.

RE: Feedback on my first thread design - Xifoz - Apr 3, 2020

I like the feature at the top, the white on navy blue stands out. The overall design is clean too. The font used is clearly legible and the titles are visible to the eye over the bullet point statements below them.

There's a little too much space between the lines of text and alignment can be improved along with making the blue gradients less prominent between sections. Doing some of those little tweaks will help with the flow a lot! Also, make spacing for bullet points even throughout. Keep titles the same capitalization and don't have half capitalized and the other half not.

The background is really nice, make the elements stand out a tad more though, you've put work into it and it should be appreciated.

For your first thread design attempt I'd say it's really good, keep it up. Way better than when I first started out in Graphic Design professionally.

RE: Feedback on my first thread design - Luca - Apr 3, 2020

Looks professional but IMO there's too much text. Maybe try balancing it out by adding some icons for maybe payment and such?

7.5/10

RE: Feedback on my first thread design - 4rm00rl4t - Apr 4, 2020

(Apr 3, 2020 07:09 AM)Xifoz Wrote:  I like the feature at the top, the white on navy blue stands out. The overall design is clean too. The font used is clearly legible and the titles are visible to the eye over the bullet point statements below them.

There's a little too much space between the lines of text and alignment can be improved along with making the blue gradients less prominent between sections. Doing some of those little tweaks will help with the flow a lot! Also, make spacing for bullet points even throughout. Keep titles the same capitalization and don't have half capitalized and the other half not.

The background is really nice, make the elements stand out a tad more though, you've put work into it and it should be appreciated.

For your first thread design attempt I'd say it's really good, keep it up. Way better than when I first started out in Graphic Design professionally.

Thank you so much, your comment actually really motivates me to keep learning more about design. :)

(Apr 3, 2020 10:21 AM)Luca Wrote:  Looks professional but IMO there's too much text. Maybe try balancing it out by adding some icons for maybe payment and such?

7.5/10

Appreciate your thoughts and thanks for letting me know what to improve on!

RE: Feedback on my first thread design - Xifoz - Apr 4, 2020

(Apr 4, 2020 11:12 AM)4rm00rl4t Wrote:  Thank you so much, your comment actually really motivates me to keep learning more about design. :)


It's my pleasure, if you have any questions message me on HF. I'll be happy to provide you with my Discord details.

RE: Feedback on my first thread design - checquesss - Apr 4, 2020

Make section titles larger or bold maybe?