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New thread design for my own sales thread - vyactor - Jun 4, 2020
Any feedback is highly appreciated!
Also updated my portfolio with new looks: Click Here to go to Portfolio
Preview:
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![[Image: cFEQGUP.png]](https://i.imgur.com/cFEQGUP.png)
Revised Preview:
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![[Image: uFw9koa.png]](https://i.imgur.com/uFw9koa.png)
RE: New thread design for my own sales thread - Herbert - Jun 5, 2020
Beautiful colors.
There are a few issues.
- Spacing between words in the 'About.'
- The example images are too small.
- Pricing for banners is still set to 'xx$'
- Work on the font-weight, it looks good but you missed some places.
- Alignments are OK, but they aren't precise.
Tip: use the align tool
![[Image: 98229b81cd.png]](https://puu.sh/FSWam/98229b81cd.png)
6/10
RE: New thread design for my own sales thread - vyactor - Jun 5, 2020
(Jun 5, 2020 04:53 AM)Herbert Wrote: Beautiful colors.
There are a few issues.
- Spacing between words in the 'About.'
- The example images are too small.
- Pricing for banners is still set to 'xx$'
- Work on the font-weight, it looks good but you missed some places.
- Alignments are OK, but they aren't precise.
Tip: use the align tool
6/10
I appreciate your time on leaving feedback.
1. The paragraph in About section is justified which makes its word spacing look kind of weird.
2. I've actually thought of not keeping example images at first. Later, I decided to let viewers have a quick look at the layouts which I guess is kinda visible rather than whole contents (information) inside thread design.
3. That section isn't supposed to be only for the banner so I've written 'and many other!' at the end. Also, the paragraph I guess kinda defines what other services I offer. So, it's not like I'm taking the same amount of money for all those services. So, I've left it as 'XX$'.
4. Montserrat always had been one of my favorite fonts. In photoshop, I can only access its two weights i.e Regular and Bold while I can access its lighter version, regular, semibold, and bold version in other Adobe Applications. So its regular and bold version got kind of similar weights. I'll definitely give a quick look at this issue on the Internet.
5. I definitely use align tool and I'm trying my best to make alignments more precise by using rulers and guides in Photoshop.
RE: New thread design for my own sales thread - OxaByte - Jun 5, 2020
i am sorry but text is very hard to read. i dont find it easy reading. maybe chanding the font will work.
RE: New thread design for my own sales thread - vyactor - Jun 5, 2020
(Jun 5, 2020 01:43 PM)OxaByte Wrote: i am sorry but text is very hard to read. i dont find it easy reading. maybe chanding the font will work.
Like I said, I'll take that into consideration and will see what I can do.
(Jun 5, 2020 04:53 AM)Herbert Wrote: -snip-
(Jun 5, 2020 01:43 PM)OxaByte Wrote: -snip-
I've updated the thread with a new thread design after revising the fonts.