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Could someone read over my creative writing piece quickly? - Vagues - Jul 12, 2020
This is a creative response on the novella "The Metamorphosis" by Franz Kafka. I'm focusing on analyzing the theme of sympathy in the book. I have gone through many drafts, but I am looking for some more opinion on it. A quick read through with any comments or edits would be much appreciated.
Side note: I need a title for my response, if anyone could help me come up with a creative title that has an analytical approach it would be much appreciated.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CcMSYdkJm4rqTQ3HYFQlrj3v1jAFu16rib_G3MT23j4/edit?usp=sharing
RE: Could someone read over my creative writing piece quickly? - RootK9 - Jul 12, 2020
Very nice story man, for the title I would probably name it "Grief of Gregor"
It's a very sympathetic story and shows a great amount of empathy and concern for their brother.
RE: Could someone read over my creative writing piece quickly? - Vagues - Jul 12, 2020
(Jul 12, 2020 06:17 PM)RootK9 Wrote: Very nice story man, for the title I would probably name it "Grief of Gregor"
It's a very sympathetic story and shows a great amount of empathy and concern for their brother.
Thank you, that title definitely is interesting and I will consider it. Do you have any ideas for a title that perhaps play on Grete's sympathy?