[Web Design] Landing Page Design. Need feedback.

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[Web Design] Landing Page Design. Need feedback. - Aired - Jul 24, 2013

Hello,

I designed a landing page which I later plan to sell to ThemeForest, but in the mean time I need feedback for the design, so my partner can go ahead and start coding it.

For now, I made 3 color variations, and I do plan to add more later on. This website is targeted for Apps, Softwares, and Products.

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Please give me some pointers of what I can possibly add, remove, or modify for what I have.

Thank you.

* - Amazing - Jul 24, 2013

Wow, it's awesome. Clean, simple and professional.

* - Fox™ - Jul 24, 2013

I really like it, just like Amazing said above - it's clean and simple. Has a nice feel to it. Good work!

Regards,
~ Storm 🤝

* - Broke - Jul 25, 2013

Clean and simple, looks sick. I'd go with the green colour though, makes it more friendly :)

* - Ivy Mike - Jul 25, 2013

Wow I was expecting something different aha, this is quite amazing you have a lot of talent, I like the blue version as it promotes "calm" as it says on the website. Anyway I really like these designs really clean and professional imo, keep up the good work :-)

* - gnarly. - Jul 25, 2013

i love them, they are very clean well done

* - MyLittlePony - Jul 25, 2013

Beautiful.
The green version is the best as it matches the theme of the phone's picture.
Amazing job.

* - Josylvio - Jul 25, 2013

In which program did you make this? It's awesome. Green is the best choice in my opinion.

* - Ivy Mike - Jul 25, 2013

(Jul 25, 2013 03:33 AM)Odiux Wrote: In which program did you make this? It's awesome. Green is the best choice in my opinion.

I would assume he used Photoshop but wait for his response.

* - Nilsson - Jul 25, 2013

It's actually pretty cool, but maybe it's to empty. There's to many empty spaces that should be filled in, other than that, Good job.

* - varhf - Jul 25, 2013

If you plan to sell it on theme forest id up the price to $10 (If the price was going to be $5)

Its a very nice theme and i disagree with user above me, the theme fits together well and looks pro.

* - Aexion - Jul 25, 2013

Looks very well designed, and only a few things stuck out to me. The colored underline in the navigation menu doesn't seem long enough to me, and I feel like the phone would look better if it wasn't cut off at the bottom. Otherwise, it's a very nice landing page! (:

* - Crimza - Jul 25, 2013

Wow, it's awesome. Clean, simple and professional.

* - Citrᴜs - Jul 25, 2013

This looks really clean man, very professional looking. I like the red the most.

* - Aired - Jul 25, 2013

(Jul 25, 2013 03:33 AM)Odiux Wrote: In which program did you make this? It's awesome. Green is the best choice in my opinion.

I used Photoshop CS6 to design it.

(Jul 25, 2013 05:36 AM)Nilsson Wrote: It's actually pretty cool, but maybe it's to empty. There's to many empty spaces that should be filled in, other than that, Good job.

Oh? Where are the empty spaces you were referring to? I personally prefer to space out the elements as much as possible so they look more cleaner in perspective. Cramped designs make me sick.

(Jul 25, 2013 06:54 AM)/var Wrote: If you plan to sell it on theme forest id up the price to $10 (If the price was going to be $5)

Its a very nice theme and i disagree with user above me, the theme fits together well and looks pro.

Haha, the $5 is just the placeholder. We authors do not get to decide on the price; ThemeForest do.

(Jul 25, 2013 08:33 AM)Aexion Wrote: Looks very well designed, and only a few things stuck out to me. The colored underline in the navigation menu doesn't seem long enough to me, and I feel like the phone would look better if it wasn't cut off at the bottom. Otherwise, it's a very nice landing page! (:

I totally get what you mean by the colored underline being short and it was intentional. I just wanted to try something new and see how it'd look. I guess I failed, haha. And as for the phone, yes I understand. I will try to see what I can do to fit the whole phone in.

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Thanks everyone for all the feedback, I really appreciate them. Cheers!