[Aired]

Hello,

I designed a landing page which I later plan to sell to ThemeForest, but in the mean time I need feedback for the design, so my partner can go ahead and start coding it.

For now, I made 3 color variations, and I do plan to add more later on. This website is targeted for Apps, Softwares, and Products.

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Green:


Red:


Blue:



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Ignore the bottom white box at the very bottom and all the empty space.


Please give me some pointers of what I can possibly add, remove, or modify for what I have.

Thank you.

[Amazing]

Wow, it's awesome. Clean, simple and professional.

[Fox™]

I really like it, just like Amazing said above - it's clean and simple. Has a nice feel to it. Good work!

Regards,
~ Storm 🤝

[Broke]

Clean and simple, looks sick. I'd go with the green colour though, makes it more friendly :)

[Ivy Mike]

Wow I was expecting something different aha, this is quite amazing you have a lot of talent, I like the blue version as it promotes "calm" as it says on the website. Anyway I really like these designs really clean and professional imo, keep up the good work :-)

[gnarly.]

i love them, they are very clean well done

[MyLittlePony]

Beautiful.
The green version is the best as it matches the theme of the phone's picture.
Amazing job.

[Josylvio]

In which program did you make this? It's awesome. Green is the best choice in my opinion.

[Ivy Mike]

In which program did you make this? It's awesome. Green is the best choice in my opinion.

I would assume he used Photoshop but wait for his response.

[Nilsson]

It's actually pretty cool, but maybe it's to empty. There's to many empty spaces that should be filled in, other than that, Good job.

[varhf]

If you plan to sell it on theme forest id up the price to $10 (If the price was going to be $5)

Its a very nice theme and i disagree with user above me, the theme fits together well and looks pro.

[Aexion]

Looks very well designed, and only a few things stuck out to me. The colored underline in the navigation menu doesn't seem long enough to me, and I feel like the phone would look better if it wasn't cut off at the bottom. Otherwise, it's a very nice landing page! (:

[Crimza]

Wow, it's awesome. Clean, simple and professional.

[Citrᴜs]

This looks really clean man, very professional looking. I like the red the most.

[Aired]

In which program did you make this? It's awesome. Green is the best choice in my opinion.

I used Photoshop CS6 to design it.

It's actually pretty cool, but maybe it's to empty. There's to many empty spaces that should be filled in, other than that, Good job.

Oh? Where are the empty spaces you were referring to? I personally prefer to space out the elements as much as possible so they look more cleaner in perspective. Cramped designs make me sick.

If you plan to sell it on theme forest id up the price to $10 (If the price was going to be $5)

Its a very nice theme and i disagree with user above me, the theme fits together well and looks pro.

Haha, the $5 is just the placeholder. We authors do not get to decide on the price; ThemeForest do.

Looks very well designed, and only a few things stuck out to me. The colored underline in the navigation menu doesn't seem long enough to me, and I feel like the phone would look better if it wasn't cut off at the bottom. Otherwise, it's a very nice landing page! (:

I totally get what you mean by the colored underline being short and it was intentional. I just wanted to try something new and see how it'd look. I guess I failed, haha. And as for the phone, yes I understand. I will try to see what I can do to fit the whole phone in.

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Thanks everyone for all the feedback, I really appreciate them. Cheers!