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Sky Island (Vector) - SyncX - Jan 23, 2014
Still practicing my shading. The size is for facebook cover photo. :)
What do you guys think?
[img]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/023/2/3/sky_island_vector_by_isyncx-d73det4.jpg[/img]
* - Kioshi - Jan 23, 2014
Your shading is a bit off, your gonna need to keep working on that. Other than that, it looks fine IMO.
* - SyncX - Jan 23, 2014
I'm still practicing my shading, so yeah. Hopefully next time I would improve again.
* - Verqazii - Jan 23, 2014
Your shading is off by a long shot. I mean, you put shading on the sun and on top of the clouds which is basically impossible.
The colors used is good, everything blends in.
I also like the characters.
Overall it's a good vector, you just need to keep on practicing.
* - Waxy - Jan 23, 2014
That UFO Beam completely demolished the piece, looks absolutely horrible.
You also need to work on the lighting source and shading aspects.
I also think this is very out of place; https://gyazo.com/317654411e809461090adfe5b8171fda
* - Spl33k3 - Jan 23, 2014
Do you draw IRL ?
Because these clouds look a bit weird :/
* - SomeCream - Jan 23, 2014
(Jan 23, 2014 07:35 AM)SyncX Wrote: Still practicing my shading. The size is for facebook cover photo. :)
What do you guys think?
[img]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/023/2/3/sky_island_vector_by_isyncx-d73det4.jpg[/img]
I am new to vectoring myself (working on my first). I think this could use a bit more detail, I understand your going for a simple style, but your lines are a bit too messy right now, and the lighting is off.
Like right here (http://prntscr.com/2m1gs4) for example you have a highlight under the hands, or drips, not sure what it is exactly. Also the vector as a whole is lacking depth, I would recommend try making one character first and work your way up to bigger pieces like these.
* - Jerk.exe - Jan 24, 2014
(Jan 23, 2014 07:45 AM)Trophix Wrote: Your shading is a bit off, your gonna need to keep working on that. Other than that, it looks fine IMO.
I do agree. The shading is kind of off. Im not saying this is bad, it's just It's not my style. Keep doing what you are doing man. I see great potential.
* - Sinatraa - Jan 24, 2014
Very simple and sleak design, 9/10.