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Sky Island (Vector)

Still practicing my shading. The size is for facebook cover photo. :)
What do you guys think?
[img]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/023/2/3/sky_island_vector_by_isyncx-d73det4.jpg[/img]
Your shading is a bit off, your gonna need to keep working on that. Other than that, it looks fine IMO.
I'm still practicing my shading, so yeah. Hopefully next time I would improve again.
Your shading is off by a long shot. I mean, you put shading on the sun and on top of the clouds which is basically impossible.

The colors used is good, everything blends in.
I also like the characters.

Overall it's a good vector, you just need to keep on practicing.
That UFO Beam completely demolished the piece, looks absolutely horrible.

You also need to work on the lighting source and shading aspects.

I also think this is very out of place; https://gyazo.com/317654411e809461090adfe5b8171fda
i'm not a douche, i'm just honest
Do you draw IRL ?
Because these clouds look a bit weird :/
(Jan 23, 2014 07:35 AM)SyncX Wrote:  Still practicing my shading. The size is for facebook cover photo. :)
What do you guys think?
[img]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/023/2/3/sky_island_vector_by_isyncx-d73det4.jpg[/img]

I am new to vectoring myself (working on my first). I think this could use a bit more detail, I understand your going for a simple style, but your lines are a bit too messy right now, and the lighting is off.

Like right here (http://prntscr.com/2m1gs4) for example you have a highlight under the hands, or drips, not sure what it is exactly. Also the vector as a whole is lacking depth, I would recommend try making one character first and work your way up to bigger pieces like these.
(Jan 23, 2014 07:45 AM)Kioshi Wrote:  Your shading is a bit off, your gonna need to keep working on that. Other than that, it looks fine IMO.

I do agree. The shading is kind of off. Im not saying this is bad, it's just It's not my style. Keep doing what you are doing man. I see great potential.
Very simple and sleak design, 9/10.


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