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Simply Imagination l Web Design l WIP - MissChiff - Nov 12, 2014
Making myself a miniature web design template. CnC is what I'm looking for :)
[I am also a freelance designer if anyone is looking for graphics 🤝]
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[I am also a freelance designer if anyone is looking for graphics 🤝]
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![[Image: 9b47c92f7fb4110157b90adaed6a0ccc.png]](https://i.gyazo.com/9b47c92f7fb4110157b90adaed6a0ccc.png)
* - Xanz - Nov 12, 2014
Good design but the colors seem kind of boring to me. Also that background picture isn't the best. Great starting point though op :)
* - clark.dll - Nov 12, 2014
Love it, where'd you get those logo's from?
* - MissChiff - Nov 12, 2014
(Nov 12, 2014 07:40 PM)Xanz Wrote: Good design but the colors seem kind of boring to me. Also that background picture isn't the best. Great starting point though op :)
I agree the picture is boring. And I used those colors to match the tie on the background image. I kind of wanted to make it subtle.
(Nov 12, 2014 07:41 PM)Clark Wrote: Love it, where'd you get those logo's from?
I found each one individually.
Pencil: http://simpleicon.com/wp-content/uploads/pencil.png
Web Design: http://www.iconsdb.com/icons/preview/black/website-design-xxl.png
Deliver: https://cdn2.iconfinder.com/data/icons/windows-8-metro-style/512/delivery_food.png
Hope it helps!
* - Crookz805 - Nov 12, 2014
Colors are shy the logo is ok man I'm not a gfx expert but I like where this is going great idea and concept.
* - A n g e l - Nov 13, 2014
Looks really good and clean, I like it a lot 🤝
* - Stu-Pot - Nov 13, 2014
Looking sweet man, keep it up!
I made a very nice Thread Design aswell.
* - ACDC - Nov 13, 2014
Looks good man, looks sleek and professional
EDIT: I noticed the image has a glove in the top pocket, at first this looks like a hand calling you in, which matches well with the title simply imagination, don't know if that was intentional.
* - Kurdish Falcon - Nov 13, 2014
Great job, Chiff. I really like the clean colors and design; it really emphasizes your tagline and what your website design is 'all about'.
I hope to see even better work from you.
* - Defy_ - Nov 13, 2014
Doesn't look very polished and not a fan of the font choice.
Looks quite similar to this. https://hackforums.net/showthread.php?tid=4531655
* - Sunkist S0D4 - Nov 13, 2014
(Nov 13, 2014 12:45 PM)Defy_ Wrote: Doesn't look very polished and not a fan of the font choice.
Looks quite similar to this. https://hackforums.net/showthread.php?tid=4531655
I suppose he was inspired with my latest piece. Which isn't a bad thing but there are better sources for inspiration scattered across the web.
Some thing you might want to think about.. is that the layout isn't best to be used for portfolio/freelance purposes imo.
A change in the background image could make a overall improvement in the design.
The current position of the "Login" text makes me feel like its less of a button and more of a form. Maybe brighten the gray a tad more so it stands out.
Perhaps remove the "More Info" text under the "View Portfolio" button. Simply add more info by expanding the canvas and provide more to the homepage.
Enough with the critism, hopefully you take it into consideration upon your next version. Not bad OP, keep it up I would love to see your updated version.
Did you design what is in these triangles?
https://gyazo.com/ae5f6374fc5ac107d3823c0353b39542
* - MissChiff - Nov 13, 2014
(Nov 13, 2014 12:45 PM)Defy_ Wrote: Doesn't look very polished and not a fan of the font choice.
Looks quite similar to this. https://hackforums.net/showthread.php?tid=4531655
I did mine based off Coinbase's website, and the body isn't even remotely similar to that, but thanks for the input.
(Nov 13, 2014 01:15 PM)Sunkist S0D4 Wrote: I suppose he was inspired with my latest piece. Which isn't a bad thing but there are better sources for inspiration scattered across the web.
Some thing you might want to think about.. is that the layout isn't best to be used for portfolio/freelance purposes imo.
A change in the background image could make a overall improvement in the design.
The current position of the "Login" text makes me feel like its less of a button and more of a form. Maybe brighten the gray a tad more so it stands out.
Perhaps remove the "More Info" text under the "View Portfolio" button. Simply add more info by expanding the canvas and provide more to the homepage.
Enough with the critism, hopefully you take it into consideration upon your next version. Not bad OP, keep it up I would love to see your updated version.
Did you design what is in these triangles?
https://gyazo.com/ae5f6374fc5ac107d3823c0353b39542
Thanks for the feedback, I'll post a revised version when I get the chance. And no, I didn't design those web designs.
* - Zen - Nov 13, 2014
Are you planning to develop this into a functional website?
* - MissChiff - Nov 14, 2014
(Nov 13, 2014 08:39 PM)Enso. Wrote: Are you planning to develop this into a functional website?
No, I just do these for fun and to build my portfolio.