(Nov 10, 2015 10:41 AM)infosecnerd Wrote:  Hey Buddy,

Not sure if you are still offering the $20 BTC for helpful feedback or not.... if you're not, then you have given so much to me in terms of this RAT that I will offer my insights anyway.

Just so you know my insights actually have value, I have been making money online for over 10 years and the majority of this has been through email marketing, which of course needs strong landing page and sales page skills.

1) The first thing I see in the thread is
"Save $5 by Changing your Signature! Click Here for Details!"

This statement is immediately diverting my attention away from your sales page and your product. Not only that, you are also INSTRUCTING me to click away from your sales page, and by doing such, you are pushing me away from your checkout!

I would simply replace it with a follow up email once your customer has made their purchase. At least this way, you are minimising the reasons for people to abandon the checkout.

2) The second things I see are the following vouches:
"Unlike many other RAT's, this RAT delivers what is promised. I can't say a single bad word about this product."
"I can't say enough about this tool. Incredibly stable, full of features."

These vouches are ok to have where they are, however you need to remove the "click here" text and remove the fact it links away, as this is again, another reason for your potential customers to abandon the checkout process.

3) The next thing I see is:
"100+ Vouches from Real Customers - Click Here to Read More!"

Again, the fact you have over 100+ satisfied customers is a fantastic thing to be advertising, however you are offering another link for your potential customers to follow, which is giving them another chance to abandon their checkout process.

I don't think there is a need for a link here - just tell them you have over 100+ happy customers.

4) The next issue is the following, which is displayed just above the start of the infographic:
"Purchase Luminosity here: Instant Delivery - AutoBuy URL
Click Here to Purchase LuminosityLink"

This is PERFECT placement and the wording is excellent, however you need to make the text bigger, bolder and more contrasting to the background. If possible, I would probably consider using an image as well (something akin to a Belcher Button).

I would also add the words "Risk-Free" "Secure" "No-Hassle" "Free Life Time Updates"

5) Just after the ending of the infographic you have the following text:
"150+ Features"

I would include another checkout button here (or a highly contrasting buy now link), as some people respond to images as oppose to text, and a checkout button situated here would capture the sales of those people.

6) Just after the big list of features, I would include yet another sales button (or high contrasting buy now link). This is to capture the sales of people that are only interested in benefits, results and how the program will benefit them personally.

7) At the bottom of your sales page you have the following text:
"What are you waiting for? Clicks Here to Purchase Now!"

Firstly, there is a grammatical error, and it should be "Click" here to purchase now, as oppose to "Clicks" here to purchase now.

Also, this should be contrasting to the background so it stands out, and should also include the following phrases: "No Risk" Hassle Free" "Secure Checkout" "Instant Delivery" "Free Updates For Life" etc.

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I hope the above helps in any way. If you have any questions about any of the points above, just let me know.

Also, are you willing to offer $5 BTC to people that have already bought your product and display your specific signature, as I would certainly do this, and it would help to spread the word of LL all over the forums?

Thanks KFC.
InfoSecNerd.