[KFC Watermelon]

This contest was an excellent success and I thank everybody for their feedback. I learned a lot and implanted many changes to my sales thread based on feedback here. Thank you all for your contributions!

While a LOT of people have posted high quality feedback, the winner (who had the most helpful content) goes to: infosecnerd

Hey Buddy,

Not sure if you are still offering the $20 BTC for helpful feedback or not.... if you're not, then you have given so much to me in terms of this RAT that I will offer my insights anyway.

Just so you know my insights actually have value, I have been making money online for over 10 years and the majority of this has been through email marketing, which of course needs strong landing page and sales page skills.

1) The first thing I see in the thread is
"Save $5 by Changing your Signature! Click Here for Details!"

This statement is immediately diverting my attention away from your sales page and your product. Not only that, you are also INSTRUCTING me to click away from your sales page, and by doing such, you are pushing me away from your checkout!

I would simply replace it with a follow up email once your customer has made their purchase. At least this way, you are minimising the reasons for people to abandon the checkout.

2) The second things I see are the following vouches:
"Unlike many other RAT's, this RAT delivers what is promised. I can't say a single bad word about this product."
"I can't say enough about this tool. Incredibly stable, full of features."

These vouches are ok to have where they are, however you need to remove the "click here" text and remove the fact it links away, as this is again, another reason for your potential customers to abandon the checkout process.

3) The next thing I see is:
"100+ Vouches from Real Customers - Click Here to Read More!"

Again, the fact you have over 100+ satisfied customers is a fantastic thing to be advertising, however you are offering another link for your potential customers to follow, which is giving them another chance to abandon their checkout process.

I don't think there is a need for a link here - just tell them you have over 100+ happy customers.

4) The next issue is the following, which is displayed just above the start of the infographic:
"Purchase Luminosity here: Instant Delivery - AutoBuy URL
Click Here to Purchase LuminosityLink"

This is PERFECT placement and the wording is excellent, however you need to make the text bigger, bolder and more contrasting to the background. If possible, I would probably consider using an image as well (something akin to a Belcher Button).

I would also add the words "Risk-Free" "Secure" "No-Hassle" "Free Life Time Updates"

5) Just after the ending of the infographic you have the following text:
"150+ Features"

I would include another checkout button here (or a highly contrasting buy now link), as some people respond to images as oppose to text, and a checkout button situated here would capture the sales of those people.

6) Just after the big list of features, I would include yet another sales button (or high contrasting buy now link). This is to capture the sales of people that are only interested in benefits, results and how the program will benefit them personally.

7) At the bottom of your sales page you have the following text:
"What are you waiting for? Clicks Here to Purchase Now!"

Firstly, there is a grammatical error, and it should be "Click" here to purchase now, as oppose to "Clicks" here to purchase now.

Also, this should be contrasting to the background so it stands out, and should also include the following phrases: "No Risk" Hassle Free" "Secure Checkout" "Instant Delivery" "Free Updates For Life" etc.

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I hope the above helps in any way. If you have any questions about any of the points above, just let me know.

Also, are you willing to offer $5 BTC to people that have already bought your product and display your specific signature, as I would certainly do this, and it would help to spread the word of LL all over the forums?

Thanks KFC.
InfoSecNerd.

Again, thank you all so much for your contributions!

[Jokes]

I love the thread design and the entire post in general, very simple to read. Thanks for this giveaway.

[Multibyte]

The thread design is clear and simple, but personally I would change the color, that yellow hurts my eyes, the rest is perfect 👍
Thanks for the opportunity, Sir 🤝

[Incendiary.]

The vouches on the first post kinda of look out of place. Possibly a tad too large?
Anyone, good luck to everyone entering the contest.

EDIT: You have 1111 rep >.<

[Aurora]

The thread design looks okay to me. A color change maybe? That yellow is eh.

[TheUnknownPlague]

I like it it looks colorful and really lures in customers and looks over all inviting

[BTB™]

Hi,

Please have my honest feedback -

- The text at the starting of the thread is killing the entire design of this HQ thread. Please try to embed it in the thread design it self.

- Once you have done that, try to reduce the text part to the maximum. Especially the text part at the starting of the post.

- Believe me mate, around 80% of HF is fond of seeing text in pictures or only pictures, particularly in a Sales Thread. Frankly, no one has time to read out such long sentences. Please don't mind, I am giving a honest feedback.

- That YELLOW and ORANGISH color should be avoided. Please stick to the theme colors you have selected in the pictures. They are cool enough.

- Last but not the least, you need to arrange the positioning of the text in the post.

- A Sales thread should begin with a catchy image a the start; not with two paragraph's of text. Secondly, keep all the vouches in one place; vouches at different places are actually confusing!

Regards n GLWS.

[ηυмв]

Thread design is professional and clear. The yellow font looks nice on the features but the vouches and photos would look better in a spoiler link.

[SIM-2015410]

I really like the thread design, it's one of the cleanest I've seen and really suits the product. Only thing I would change is compact the screen shots a bit, maybe make an animated gif cycling through them or something because it's a bit too many in a row down the page.

[420 Blaze It]

Thread design is too bland for me. Needs some update.

[YungTrigz]

The thread design is prety cool, It shows what needs to be shown including wll the amazing features ll has.

[Vintel]

Your thread design is awesome but I think that its too much text on the top of the thread.

GL everyone.

[KFC Watermelon]

Thanks for the tips guys. I want to re-do my thread design and these comments are helpful.

[13abyknight]

Thread design is a neat overall but the text needs some improvisation.

[Knowledgeable]

I very much like the thread design it's very friendly.
I feel the vouches aren't so easy on the eyes, I get what you're trying to do and it makes perfect sense but maybe make one big image of the vouches being highlighted... maybe even a gif.
Overall i really like that you included product images because so few users do that and it's very important to do for sales.