• First of all, you can make your thread design wider, don't be afraid of it. I always recommend a width of 900-1100 pixels. It gives you more room to work with and the thread design won't feel cloggy as it does now.
  
• I understand how you separate the different sections, but you can do it on a much more efficient way by making different rows instead of blocks. It will give you the opportunity of variating the way you separate your sections.
  
• Don't just randomly have blocks on your thread design to fill up empty space, instead use the space in a better way right away to avoid having to do what you did.
  
• Again, if you would make your sections in a better way you wouldn't have to put the payment methods in small blocks. Instead, you can put it right on the new section that is another color or such.
  
• Have a header, it will give you a better understanding right away of what the service is about. In your case you could name is something like "<name's> services and a slogan like "Your go-to guy!".
  

(Jun 17, 2017 12:12 PM)Social Marketing Wrote:  First of all, the black bars why they there? (at contact)

second of all, you can easily find "Paypal, Bitcoin Ethereum" Without backgrounds so you dont have the white thing. This would improve ur thread design alot.

(Jun 17, 2017 12:13 PM)Perma Wrote:  I think you should both work on your skills and consider creating one thread in which you post all your new designs.
I doubt anyone would use this.

(Jun 17, 2017 12:15 PM)ProGenius Wrote:  looks very simple like design on print

here some tips for improving ur design
remove logo backgrounds
use canva.com i recommended it
choose good font

(Jun 17, 2017 12:23 PM)Maxim Wrote:  It's nice that you keep on making thread designs in order to improve yourself, however, I feel like you are missing basics that you keep failing on, will try to list them and hopefully, you will read it and learn from it.

• First of all, you can make your thread design wider, don't be afraid of it. I always recommend a width of 900-1100 pixels. It gives you more room to work with and the thread design won't feel cloggy as it does now.
  
• I understand how you separate the different sections, but you can do it on a much more efficient way by making different rows instead of blocks. It will give you the opportunity of variating the way you separate your sections.
  
• Don't just randomly have blocks on your thread design to fill up empty space, instead use the space in a better way right away to avoid having to do what you did.
  
• Again, if you would make your sections in a better way you wouldn't have to put the payment methods in small blocks. Instead, you can put it right on the new section that is another color or such.
  
• Have a header, it will give you a better understanding right away of what the service is about. In your case you could name is something like "<name's> services and a slogan like "Your go-to guy!".
  

I recommend you to read this thread about making thread designs:
- The Beginners Guide to Thread Design Making

Get a better understanding of the very basics and then start to improve particular areas that you feel that you need improvement on.

Good luck.

(Jun 17, 2017 12:39 PM)Jynxable Wrote:  After 4 designs and has no one told you to at least change your font? It looks like you've never seen another thread design before making this. I would recommend looking at other thread designs and see what they do. Really if you just base your next thread design off of Maxims tutorial you should have some decent work.

(Sep 30, 2017 06:29 AM)BramZ Wrote:  Hi my bro... i think that's good :)