[Zens]

This thread is closed. Cheers

[Social Marketing]

First of all, the black bars why they there? (at contact)

second of all, you can easily find "Paypal, Bitcoin Ethereum" Without backgrounds so you dont have the white thing. This would improve ur thread design alot.

[OnePlus6]

I think you should both work on your skills and consider creating one thread in which you post all your new designs.
I doubt anyone would use this.

[Horus God]

looks very simple like design on print

here some tips for improving ur design
remove logo backgrounds
use canva.com i recommended it
choose good font

[Mαxim]

It's nice that you keep on making thread designs in order to improve yourself, however, I feel like you are missing basics that you keep failing on, will try to list them and hopefully, you will read it and learn from it.

• First of all, you can make your thread design wider, don't be afraid of it. I always recommend a width of 900-1100 pixels. It gives you more room to work with and the thread design won't feel cloggy as it does now.
  
• I understand how you separate the different sections, but you can do it on a much more efficient way by making different rows instead of blocks. It will give you the opportunity of variating the way you separate your sections.
  
• Don't just randomly have blocks on your thread design to fill up empty space, instead use the space in a better way right away to avoid having to do what you did.
  
• Again, if you would make your sections in a better way you wouldn't have to put the payment methods in small blocks. Instead, you can put it right on the new section that is another color or such.
  
• Have a header, it will give you a better understanding right away of what the service is about. In your case you could name is something like "<name's> services and a slogan like "Your go-to guy!".
  

I recommend you to read this thread about making thread designs:
- The Beginners Guide to Thread Design Making

Get a better understanding of the very basics and then start to improve particular areas that you feel that you need improvement on.

Good luck.

[Anton Chigurh]

After 4 designs and has no one told you to at least change your font? It looks like you've never seen another thread design before making this. I would recommend looking at other thread designs and see what they do. Really if you just base your next thread design off of Maxims tutorial you should have some decent work.

[Zens]

First of all, the black bars why they there? (at contact)

second of all, you can easily find "Paypal, Bitcoin Ethereum" Without backgrounds so you dont have the white thing. This would improve ur thread design alot.

I feel if i remove the black bars, the unused space will looked bad, so i add the black bars. I already found ethereum logo without background, but i feel white background will make it looked cool. I will take your suggestion sir. Thank you.

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I think you should both work on your skills and consider creating one thread in which you post all your new designs.
I doubt anyone would use this.

Thank you sir, i will take your suggestion.

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looks very simple like design on print

here some tips for improving ur design
remove logo backgrounds
use canva.com i recommended it
choose good font

I tried to make it as simple as i can, i look the thread of another professional member, they make their thread looked simple but looked cool, so i tried to make my thread design looked simple too. I already remove the background of logo, but i feel it make the logo looked bad, so i add the background, next time i will make it without background. Thank you sir for your suggestion.

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It's nice that you keep on making thread designs in order to improve yourself, however, I feel like you are missing basics that you keep failing on, will try to list them and hopefully, you will read it and learn from it.

• First of all, you can make your thread design wider, don't be afraid of it. I always recommend a width of 900-1100 pixels. It gives you more room to work with and the thread design won't feel cloggy as it does now.
  
• I understand how you separate the different sections, but you can do it on a much more efficient way by making different rows instead of blocks. It will give you the opportunity of variating the way you separate your sections.
  
• Don't just randomly have blocks on your thread design to fill up empty space, instead use the space in a better way right away to avoid having to do what you did.
  
• Again, if you would make your sections in a better way you wouldn't have to put the payment methods in small blocks. Instead, you can put it right on the new section that is another color or such.
  
• Have a header, it will give you a better understanding right away of what the service is about. In your case you could name is something like "<name's> services and a slogan like "Your go-to guy!".
  

I recommend you to read this thread about making thread designs:
- The Beginners Guide to Thread Design Making

Get a better understanding of the very basics and then start to improve particular areas that you feel that you need improvement on.

Good luck.

Thank you for your suggestion sir.

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After 4 designs and has no one told you to at least change your font? It looks like you've never seen another thread design before making this. I would recommend looking at other thread designs and see what they do. Really if you just base your next thread design off of Maxims tutorial you should have some decent work.

I look at another professional member design, they make it looked simple but looked cool, so i tried do the same thing too. Thank your for your feedback sir.

[BramZ]

Hi my bro... i think that's good :)

[Zens]

Hi my bro... i think that's good :)

Thank you for your kind word 🤝 goodluck and have a nice day

[SIM-1589588]

Which software you are using to make them? Please don't say Microsoft paint.

[Lanve]

I have mixed feelings about them since it's just your 4th design (assuming from the title). Try to align the icons better from the edge of the rectangle and make them the exact same as on the left side. Also try to make the font a little smaller, will give it a more professional and cleaner look.

Also I am not sure why there are two black bars next to the contact box, completely unnecessary and doesn't make the thread design look better.

And the last thing, remove the white background from the logos you used to show what payment methods you are accepting.

[Zinnia]

Nothing too special.
Just a backround, little text boxes with texts, and icon's thrown next to them.
Plus some images.

Work on making it more unique and abstract.
Try using Canva as a starter.

3/10.