(Jun 18, 2017 11:49 PM)Copywriter Wrote:  It's definitely improved, keep going man!
Keep on learning.

(Jun 19, 2017 11:04 AM)Maxim Wrote:  Aw you totally ignored all my suggestions for you to improve your thread design.

(Jun 17, 2017 12:23 PM)Maxim Wrote:  It's nice that you keep on making thread designs in order to improve yourself, however, I feel like you are missing basics that you keep failing on, will try to list them and hopefully, you will read it and learn from it.

• First of all, you can make your thread design wider, don't be afraid of it. I always recommend a width of 900-1100 pixels. It gives you more room to work with and the thread design won't feel cloggy as it does now.
  
• I understand how you separate the different sections, but you can do it on a much more efficient way by making different rows instead of blocks. It will give you the opportunity of variating the way you separate your sections.
  
• Don't just randomly have blocks on your thread design to fill up empty space, instead use the space in a better way right away to avoid having to do what you did.
  
• Again, if you would make your sections in a better way you wouldn't have to put the payment methods in small blocks. Instead, you can put it right on the new section that is another color or such.
  
• Have a header, it will give you a better understanding right away of what the service is about. In your case you could name is something like "<name's> services and a slogan like "Your go-to guy!".
  

I recommend you to read this thread about making thread designs:
- The Beginners Guide to Thread Design Making

Get a better understanding of the very basics and then start to improve particular areas that you feel that you need improvement on.

Good luck.