[Zens]

This thread is closed. Cheers

[Copywriter]

It's definitely improved, keep going man!
Keep on learning.

[Zens]

It's definitely improved, keep going man!
Keep on learning.

Thank you sir. 🤝

[Debugger]

well that's really nice & yes u can improve ur skills more
Good Luck!

[TheChiеf]

It looks awful. I don't know why you are using that background fill in the text...

[Mαxim]

Aw you totally ignored all my suggestions for you to improve your thread design.

[Zens]

Aw you totally ignored all my suggestions for you to improve your thread design.

No, i follow your suggestion.

It's nice that you keep on making thread designs in order to improve yourself, however, I feel like you are missing basics that you keep failing on, will try to list them and hopefully, you will read it and learn from it.

• First of all, you can make your thread design wider, don't be afraid of it. I always recommend a width of 900-1100 pixels. It gives you more room to work with and the thread design won't feel cloggy as it does now.
  
• I understand how you separate the different sections, but you can do it on a much more efficient way by making different rows instead of blocks. It will give you the opportunity of variating the way you separate your sections.
  
• Don't just randomly have blocks on your thread design to fill up empty space, instead use the space in a better way right away to avoid having to do what you did.
  
• Again, if you would make your sections in a better way you wouldn't have to put the payment methods in small blocks. Instead, you can put it right on the new section that is another color or such.
  
• Have a header, it will give you a better understanding right away of what the service is about. In your case you could name is something like "<name's> services and a slogan like "Your go-to guy!".
  

I recommend you to read this thread about making thread designs:
- The Beginners Guide to Thread Design Making

Get a better understanding of the very basics and then start to improve particular areas that you feel that you need improvement on.

Good luck.

I make it become 900x1280 (1280 because its no more space for place the payment method.)
I don't place any random block.
I not separate it become row because i confuse where i put the FAQ.
For payment method. I make it larger.

[Anton Chigurh]

You missed one very important step which is to make every thing into rows instead of blocks. You did kinda but not really.

[radicalxfrosty]

It is nice, maybe you should turn the red blocks into rows.