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Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - Shef - Apr 8, 2018
Hey guys so i just got into rapping and im really taking this serious. Can you guys tell me what i should work on ? Im looking for constructive criticism please thanks. I didnt do good in school so this is my only option i gotta make it in this industry!
RE: Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - Zexi - Apr 8, 2018
Did you use your phone microphone to record this shit?
3/10 for posting it in the wrong forum.
RE: Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - Cammy - Apr 8, 2018
Goddamn it at the beginning i thought I was looking at jim carrey's younger slav brother
RE: Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - Mr.Cat - Apr 8, 2018
man honestly... go back to your computer and play some minecraft
RE: Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - Woes - Apr 8, 2018
THIS SHIT GOES STOOPID HARDT.
RE: Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - Shef - Apr 8, 2018
(Apr 8, 2018 07:02 AM)Cammy Wrote: Goddamn it at the beginning i thought I was looking at jim carrey's younger slav brother
Lol yeah a lot of people say i look like jim carrey lol
RE: Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - OnePlus6 - Apr 8, 2018
Dude you're off beat, why rap when you have no rhythm..
RE: Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - Mr.Cat - Apr 8, 2018
(Apr 8, 2018 07:11 AM)NewZealander22 Wrote: Dude you're off beat, why rap when you have no rhythm..
that's the only thing u noticed?
RE: Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - Anxuein - Apr 8, 2018
You are definitely not an upcoming rapper.
RE: Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - WatermelonHazee - Apr 8, 2018
I'm not even gonna be nice or lie dude, this is fucking TRASH. i repeat DO NOT QUIT YOUR FUCKING DAY JOB BRO. YOU WILL GO BROKE AND HUNGRY!!!! 🤝
RE: Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - WageWolf - Apr 8, 2018
Completely honest, the audio is trash and you have no bars. Could use a lot of work, but don't let this discourage you, just don't quit your 9-5 just yet! ;)
RE: Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - FamousHater - Apr 8, 2018
hahah that was fucking horrible
thanks for the laugh op
RE: Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - Condescend - Apr 8, 2018
The lyrics you have do not go along with the beat, and it results in a not-so-good sound to the ears. Try and find inspiration from other aspiring rappers, and see how they match their lyrics with their beat. That is the main problem to me, personally. When it comes to the video, it doesn't really make the case any better. It honestly made me laugh. 🤣 Don't give up though!
RE: Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - Shef - Apr 8, 2018
you guys talk so much shit behind ur computers but when u see me in real life i dont hear a peep from u im strapped bihhhh i aint scared to shoot
RE: Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper. - Anxuein - Apr 8, 2018
(Apr 8, 2018 11:29 AM)Shef Wrote: you guys talk so much shit behind ur computers but when u see me in real life i dont hear a peep from u im strapped bihhhh i aint scared to shoot
You're almost as scary as your "song".