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Rate my song guys im a upcoming rapper.
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Apr 8, 2018 06:58 AM
Hey guys so i just got into rapping and im really taking this serious. Can you guys tell me what i should work on ? Im looking for constructive criticism please thanks. I didnt do good in school so this is my only option i gotta make it in this industry!


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Apr 8, 2018 07:01 AM
Did you use your phone microphone to record this shit?

3/10 for posting it in the wrong forum.
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Apr 8, 2018 07:02 AM
Goddamn it at the beginning i thought I was looking at jim carrey's younger slav brother
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Apr 8, 2018 07:02 AM
man honestly... go back to your computer and play some minecraft
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Apr 8, 2018 07:03 AM
THIS SHIT GOES STOOPID HARDT.
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Apr 8, 2018 07:04 AM
(Apr 8, 2018 07:02 AM)⁠Cammy Wrote:  Goddamn it at the beginning i thought I was looking at jim carrey's younger slav brother

Lol yeah a lot of people say i look like jim carrey lol
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Apr 8, 2018 07:11 AM
Dude you're off beat, why rap when you have no rhythm..
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Apr 8, 2018 07:13 AM
(Apr 8, 2018 07:11 AM)OnePlus6 Wrote:  Dude you're off beat, why rap when you have no rhythm..

that's the only thing u noticed?
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Apr 8, 2018 07:14 AM
You are definitely not an upcoming rapper.
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Apr 8, 2018 07:14 AM
I'm not even gonna be nice or lie dude, this is fucking TRASH. i repeat DO NOT QUIT YOUR FUCKING DAY JOB BRO. YOU WILL GO BROKE AND HUNGRY!!!! 🤝
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Apr 8, 2018 10:14 AM
Completely honest, the audio is trash and you have no bars. Could use a lot of work, but don't let this discourage you, just don't quit your 9-5 just yet! ;)
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Apr 8, 2018 10:20 AM
hahah that was fucking horrible

thanks for the laugh op
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Apr 8, 2018 10:56 AM
The lyrics you have do not go along with the beat, and it results in a not-so-good sound to the ears. Try and find inspiration from other aspiring rappers, and see how they match their lyrics with their beat. That is the main problem to me, personally. When it comes to the video, it doesn't really make the case any better. It honestly made me laugh. 🤣 Don't give up though!
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Apr 8, 2018 11:29 AM
you guys talk so much shit behind ur computers but when u see me in real life i dont hear a peep from u im strapped bihhhh i aint scared to shoot
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Apr 8, 2018 01:18 PM (This post was last modified: Apr 8, 2018 01:18 PM by Anxuein.)
(Apr 8, 2018 11:29 AM)Shef Wrote:  you guys talk so much shit behind ur computers but when u see me in real life i dont hear a peep from u im strapped bihhhh i aint scared to shoot

You're almost as scary as your "song".
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