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My First thread design! (opinions) - ZeusFX - Jan 9, 2020 I made this for my graphics store <-- (opinions?) RE: My First thread design! (opinions) - Satan! - Jan 17, 2020 By the top where it says "Elegant innovations" the quotation marks are layed over the text. Not sure if this was intentional but I find it distracting. Also, consider re-wording the about me section to "My name is Max, I am a 21 year old graphic designer from the Netherlands." You're also missing a space after the comma before "3D rendering". RE: My First thread design! (opinions) - Geralt - Jan 18, 2020 Looks great! Maybe make portfolio pictures a bit bigger so more details can be seen RE: My First thread design! (opinions) - Ramsey - Jan 18, 2020 very impressed. do you do contracted work? RE: My First thread design! (opinions) - Money- - Jan 18, 2020 Did you design the Christmas Theme for O.G.U? RE: My First thread design! (opinions) - GodHyperus - Feb 19, 2020 For your first design It's not bad! Anyways I would prefer more flat design. RE: My First thread design! (opinions) - 123 - Feb 19, 2020 As a viewer I really found this fantastic. The colour scheme is good too in my opinion. Good work Zeus. RE: My First thread design! (opinions) - Mortox - Feb 19, 2020 Dude that looks fresh. Good work man RE: My First thread design! (opinions) - Goku - Feb 19, 2020 Looks really nice! Love the color pallet too. Some improvement points: - Use a bigger line-height on the text. - the "...#1..." that drop shadow is way too harsh. - The quotation marks on the right text have a white outline, so you either got to place the text layer in the front or remove the outline. - Give the text an opacity of .8 or .7 sometimes it improves how the text display since it isn't fully black. Optional, it's your style. - "teams i have worked with" Fully capitalize the text or at least the first letter and 'i'. - The next section. above the text "Services", too much space, use the same distance as the space between the text and the content below that. - The contact section also had too much space, but you can also center the content in that space instead of removing it. - In the footer there is also a huge space. I've noticed that you should work on spacings between elements and things in general, your design taste/style is nice. Take a look at this documentation regarding this topic from the Google Design team. https://material.io/design/layout/understanding-layout.html#usage RE: My First thread design! (opinions) - Psilocybe - Feb 20, 2020 Looks great OP, good friggin job! The one little "flaw" that stood out to me right away was the yellow dripping down from the header (creative btw) but it creates a loss of proportion. What if you did that along the entire header? Instead of it being a flat line and one section of dripping color, try to make the entire image cohesive by maintaining patterns. Feel free to post a progress picture if you revise it! Other than that, it looks fantastic and I would personally buy it. RE: My First thread design! (opinions) - MK Sin - Feb 22, 2020 For your first time it is awesome