[ZeusFX]

I made this for my graphics store <--

(opinions?)

[Satan!]

By the top where it says "Elegant innovations" the quotation marks are layed over the text. Not sure if this was intentional but I find it distracting. Also, consider re-wording the about me section to "My name is Max, I am a 21 year old graphic designer from the Netherlands." You're also missing a space after the comma before "3D rendering".

[Geralt]

Looks great! Maybe make portfolio pictures a bit bigger so more details can be seen

[Ramsey]

very impressed. do you do contracted work?

[Money-]

Did you design the Christmas Theme for O.G.U?

[GodHyperus]

For your first design It's not bad! Anyways I would prefer more flat design.

[123]

As a viewer I really found this fantastic. The colour scheme is good too in my opinion. Good work Zeus.

[Mortox]

Dude that looks fresh. Good work man

[Goku]

Looks really nice! Love the color pallet too.

Some improvement points:
- Use a bigger line-height on the text.
- the "...#1..." that drop shadow is way too harsh.
- The quotation marks on the right text have a white outline, so you either got to place the text layer in the front or remove the outline.
- Give the text an opacity of .8 or .7 sometimes it improves how the text display since it isn't fully black. Optional, it's your style.
- "teams i have worked with" Fully capitalize the text or at least the first letter and 'i'.
- The next section. above the text "Services", too much space, use the same distance as the space between the text and the content below that.
- The contact section also had too much space, but you can also center the content in that space instead of removing it.
- In the footer there is also a huge space.

I've noticed that you should work on spacings between elements and things in general, your design taste/style is nice. Take a look at this documentation regarding this topic from the Google Design team.
https://material.io/design/layout/unders...html#usage

[Psilocybe]

Looks great OP, good friggin job! The one little "flaw" that stood out to me right away was the yellow dripping down from the header (creative btw) but it creates a loss of proportion. What if you did that along the entire header? Instead of it being a flat line and one section of dripping color, try to make the entire image cohesive by maintaining patterns. Feel free to post a progress picture if you revise it! Other than that, it looks fantastic and I would personally buy it.

[MK Sin]

For your first time it is awesome