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Thread design I made - Perileos - Mar 11, 2020
![[Image: huUmtxv.png]](https://i.imgur.com/huUmtxv.png)
Made it yesterday!
RE: Thread design I made - passCODE - Mar 11, 2020
I like the design but you have many mistakes in writing, go through it once again and fix the mistakes :)
RE: Thread design I made - Free Kurdistan - Mar 11, 2020
Very straight-forward, good colouring, font isn't annoying, not a lot of gibberish, so I like it.
RE: Thread design I made - Perileos - Mar 11, 2020
(Mar 11, 2020 04:22 AM)passCODE Wrote: I like the design but you have many mistakes in writing, go through it once again and fix the mistakes :)
Can you tell me where the mistakes are? I'm not native English.
Would really appreciate your help!
RE: Thread design I made - passCODE - Mar 11, 2020
(Mar 11, 2020 04:41 AM)Perileos Wrote: Can you tell me where the mistakes are? I'm not native English.
Would really appreciate your help!
I'm not 100% sure because I'm not the native English speaker either, but I'd rephrase the first line: "Tired of not getting enough sales?".
Business men needs to be businessmen, without space between.
It's necessary with 1 c, you wrote with 2.
Use not take middleman.
It's not remainding, it's remaining.
RE: Thread design I made - Perileos - Mar 11, 2020
(Mar 11, 2020 04:45 AM)passCODE Wrote: I'm not 100% sure because I'm not the native English speaker either, but I'd rephrase the first line: "Tired of not getting enough sales?".
Business men needs to be businessmen, without space between.
It's necessary with 1 c, you wrote with 2.
Use not take middleman.
It's not remainding, it's remaining.
Thank you for your help.
Will change asap.
RE: Thread design I made - Luca - Mar 12, 2020
It looks extremely professional, if that's what you were aiming for you've hit the spot.
RE: Thread design I made - Perileos - Mar 14, 2020
(Mar 12, 2020 04:34 PM)Luca Wrote: It looks extremely professional, if that's what you were aiming for you've hit the spot.
Thank you Luca, appreciate it!
RE: Thread design I made - Herbert - Mar 14, 2020
Here is my perspective.
- The profile circle being tilted gives me a headache.
- Header spacing is far too big.
- Use typography accordingly based on design, too many different fonts that do not fit.
- The positioning, alignment and dimensions are just not doing it.
- Footer lacks creativity.
- I sorta like the texture, but what's with the fade in random areas?
- Colors are OK, I personally prefer darker but that's subjective.
4/10
RE: Thread design I made - Perileos - Mar 14, 2020
(Mar 14, 2020 09:51 AM)Herbert Wrote: Here is my perspective.
- The profile circle being tilted gives me a headache.
- Header spacing is far too big.
- Use typography accordingly based on design, too many different fonts that do not fit.
- The positioning, alignment and dimensions are just not doing it.
- Footer lacks creativity.
- I sorta like the texture, but what's with the fade in random areas?
- Colors are OK, I personally prefer darker but that's subjective.
4/10
Thank you for your perspective.
The pattern texture fade came from the original pattern and I just kinda winged it.
RE: Thread design I made - grayfox - Mar 15, 2020
Personally I think it lacks some content & I believe that if you put just a little bit more effort you can actually
add some life to the design besides just having text with some minor basic modifications in blending options.
You have a right idea for text positioning & choice for font that will describe content it's readable & professional looking,
but honestly font & style you used on header & contact is quite a failure in my opinion, it gives a bit
unprofessional & amateur look that an elementary school youngers would create in school after their first class.
Can't really judge your design skills there as it's only the text & background basically,
looking forward to see more of your work & improvement, you have the potential. :)
RE: Thread design I made - 4rm00rl4t - Mar 15, 2020
I like the design very much, well done.
Did you use Illustrator or Photoshop?