[Perileos]

Made it yesterday!

[passCODE]

I like the design but you have many mistakes in writing, go through it once again and fix the mistakes :)

[Free Kurdistan]

Very straight-forward, good colouring, font isn't annoying, not a lot of gibberish, so I like it.

[Perileos]

I like the design but you have many mistakes in writing, go through it once again and fix the mistakes :)

Can you tell me where the mistakes are? I'm not native English.
Would really appreciate your help!

[passCODE]

Can you tell me where the mistakes are? I'm not native English.
Would really appreciate your help!

I'm not 100% sure because I'm not the native English speaker either, but I'd rephrase the first line: "Tired of not getting enough sales?". 

Business men needs to be businessmen, without space between.

It's necessary with 1 c, you wrote with 2. 

Use not take middleman. 

It's not remainding, it's remaining.

[Perileos]

I'm not 100% sure because I'm not the native English speaker either, but I'd rephrase the first line: "Tired of not getting enough sales?". 

Business men needs to be businessmen, without space between.

It's necessary with 1 c, you wrote with 2. 

Use not take middleman. 

It's not remainding, it's remaining.

Thank you for your help.
Will change asap.

[Luca]

It looks extremely professional, if that's what you were aiming for you've hit the spot.

[Perileos]

It looks extremely professional, if that's what you were aiming for you've hit the spot.

Thank you Luca, appreciate it!

[Herbert]

Here is my perspective.

• The profile circle being tilted gives me a headache.
  


• Header spacing is far too big.
  


• Use typography accordingly based on design, too many different fonts that do not fit.
  


• The positioning, alignment and dimensions are just not doing it.
  


• Footer lacks creativity.
  


• I sorta like the texture, but what's with the fade in random areas?
  


• Colors are OK, I personally prefer darker but that's subjective.
  

4/10

[Perileos]

Here is my perspective.

• The profile circle being tilted gives me a headache.
  


• Header spacing is far too big.
  


• Use typography accordingly based on design, too many different fonts that do not fit.
  


• The positioning, alignment and dimensions are just not doing it.
  


• Footer lacks creativity.
  


• I sorta like the texture, but what's with the fade in random areas?
  


• Colors are OK, I personally prefer darker but that's subjective.
  

4/10

Thank you for your perspective.
The pattern texture fade came from the original pattern and I just kinda winged it.

[grayfox]

Personally I think it lacks some content & I believe that if you put just a little bit more effort you can actually
add some life to the design besides just having text with some minor basic modifications in blending options.

You have a right idea for text positioning & choice for font that will describe content it's readable & professional looking,
but honestly font & style you used on header & contact is quite a failure in my opinion, it gives a bit
unprofessional & amateur look that an elementary school youngers would create in school after their first class.

Can't really judge your design skills there as it's only the text & background basically,
looking forward to see more of your work & improvement, you have the potential. :)

[4rm00rl4t]

I like the design very much, well done.
Did you use Illustrator or Photoshop?