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Poetry [Phoenix] - Black D.180109 - Dec 6, 2021
Phoenix
Golden roams the sky,
Lit fire through, like ray;
Through, the heart of ashen lay.
-by me
RE: Poetry [Phoenix] - Blockonome - Dec 6, 2021
Lovely poem you have created here, now I want at least 4 other short poems like this to read as well, in the same thread preferably, if you want to catch my soul!
RE: Poetry [Phoenix] - Black D.180109 - Dec 6, 2021
(Dec 6, 2021 04:56 AM)Дождь Wrote: Lovely poem you have created here, now I want at least 4 other short poems like this to read as well, in the same thread preferably, if you want to catch my soul!
Can I do a different thread? (@_@)
RE: Poetry [Phoenix] - Blockonome - Dec 6, 2021
(Dec 6, 2021 04:57 AM)Black D.180109 Wrote: Can I do a different thread? (@_@)
Well you can, but I would like a few poems that I can ready every day, before I start my day. So the question is, do you want to be "The Lounge" poet master for all of us?
RE: Poetry [Phoenix] - Black D.180109 - Dec 6, 2021
(Dec 6, 2021 04:58 AM)Дождь Wrote: Well you can, but I would like a few poems that I can ready every day, before I start my day. So the question is, do you want to be "The Lounge" poet master for all of us?
Poets are just poets ,not a master,
And secondly those poem take long to think of.
So maybe not everyday mate.
RE: Poetry [Phoenix] - Blockonome - Dec 6, 2021
(Dec 6, 2021 05:03 AM)Black D.180109 Wrote: Poets are just poets ,not a master,
And secondly those poem take long to think of.
So maybe not everyday mate.
Bro, I am a poetry lover and poet myself, so is this a poetry battle you are in for now?
RE: Poetry [Phoenix] - Black D.180109 - Dec 6, 2021
(Dec 6, 2021 05:06 AM)Дождь Wrote: Bro, I am a poetry lover and poet myself, so is this a poetry battle you are in for now?
A fellow poet should understand me,
If ya want some poem I wrote , just type 'poetry' in
Search box.
(There are some pieces I'm proud of)
(Snowflake have some mistake though,
That I couldn't revise)
RE: Poetry [Phoenix] - Juoku - Dec 6, 2021
Trying to revive the poetry in the lounge?
Nice poem btw :)
RE: Poetry [Phoenix] - Black D.180109 - Dec 6, 2021
(Dec 6, 2021 06:27 AM)Juoku Wrote: Trying to revive the poetry in the lounge?
Nice poem btw :)
Just trying,
Thanks
RE: Poetry [Phoenix] - 2xTheTap115 - Dec 6, 2021
(Dec 6, 2021 04:52 AM)Black D.180109 Wrote: Phoenix
Golden roams the sky,
Lit fire through, like ray;
Through, the heart of ashen lay.
-by me
Very short, but it sounds very telling.
I can see that my friend has a talent for writing🙂
RE: Poetry [Phoenix] - Lrrr - Dec 6, 2021
you can't write poetry worth shit
only way they make sense, is if you lit
but sit, smoke out, and hit the trees quick
and someone might just think you're shit's legit
RE: Poetry [Phoenix] - Black D.180109 - Dec 6, 2021
(Dec 6, 2021 09:07 AM)2xTheTap115 Wrote: Very short, but it sounds very telling.
I can see that my friend has a talent for writing🙂
Thanks
(Dec 6, 2021 06:31 PM)Lrrr Wrote: you can't write poetry worth shit
only way they make sense, is if you lit
but sit, smoke out, and hit the trees quick
and someone might just think you're shit's legit
It's nice
RE: Poetry [Phoenix] - Monero-chan - Dec 7, 2021
Okay poem you got there, not too bad but not too good either.