[Black D.180109]

Phoenix

Golden roams the sky,
Lit fire through, like ray;
Through, the heart of ashen lay.

                                                    -by me

[Blockonome]

Lovely poem you have created here, now I want at least 4 other short poems like this to read as well, in the same thread preferably, if you want to catch my soul!

[Black D.180109]

Lovely poem you have created here, now I want at least 4 other short poems like this to read as well, in the same thread preferably, if you want to catch my soul!

Can I do a different thread? (@_@)

[Blockonome]

Can I do a different thread? (@_@)

Well you can, but I would like a few poems that I can ready every day, before I start my day. So the question is, do you want to be "The Lounge" poet master for all of us?

[Black D.180109]

Well you can, but I would like a few poems that I can ready every day, before I start my day. So the question is, do you want to be "The Lounge" poet master for all of us?

Poets are just poets ,not a master,
And secondly those poem take long to think of.
So maybe not everyday mate.

[Blockonome]

Poets are just poets ,not a master,
And secondly those poem take long to think of.
So maybe not everyday mate.

Bro, I am a poetry lover and poet myself, so is this a poetry battle you are in for now?

[Black D.180109]

Bro, I am a poetry lover and poet myself, so is this a poetry battle you are in for now?

A fellow poet should understand me,
If ya want some poem I wrote , just type 'poetry' in
Search box.
(There are some pieces I'm proud of)
(Snowflake have some mistake though,
That I couldn't revise)

[Juoku]

Trying to revive the poetry in the lounge?
Nice poem btw :)

[Black D.180109]

Trying to revive the poetry in the lounge?
Nice poem btw :)

Just trying,
Thanks

[2xTheTap115]

Phoenix

Golden roams the sky,
Lit fire through, like ray;
Through, the heart of ashen lay.

                                                    -by me

Very short, but it sounds very telling.
I can see that my friend has a talent for writing🙂

[Lrrr]

you can't write poetry worth shit
only way they make sense, is if you lit
but sit, smoke out, and hit the trees quick
and someone might just think you're shit's legit

[Black D.180109]

Very short, but it sounds very telling.
I can see that my friend has a talent for writing🙂

Thanks

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you can't write poetry worth shit
only way they make sense, is if you lit
but sit, smoke out, and hit the trees quick
and someone might just think you're shit's legit

It's nice

[Monero-chan]

Okay poem you got there, not too bad but not too good either.