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dribbble debut post; twitch panels/offline screen - Herbert - Dec 4, 2019
![[Image: 19716636155acee23f166861ab05a543.png]](https://cdn.dribbble.com/users/4507686/screenshots/8792423/media/19716636155acee23f166861ab05a543.png)
url: https://dribbble.com/shots/8792423-Twitch-Panels-and-Offline-Screen
RE: dribbble debut post; twitch panels/offline screen - iRazor - Dec 5, 2019
ok let me start with the Exposure fx, i saw it at first, second is the render, i guess it was adjusted to black/white hue, maybe? ok ok this is my breakdown of your work, it is good to see in the eyes.
1. Exposure
2. Black/White on Render
3. Custom Main Text
4. Shadow on a Text maybe 0.5 ~ 1
5. Render was cut out via pentool and refine edge (maybe)
6. Good Composition and Place of Text.
9/10.
RE: dribbble debut post; twitch panels/offline screen - Herbert - Dec 5, 2019
(Dec 5, 2019 07:12 AM)iRazor Wrote: ok let me start with the Exposure fx, i saw it at first, second is the render, i guess it was adjusted to black/white hue, maybe? ok ok this is my breakdown of your work, it is good to see in the eyes.
1. Exposure
2. Black/White on Render
3. Custom Main Text
4. Shadow on a Text maybe 0.5 ~ 1
5. Render was cut out via pentool and refine edge (maybe)
6. Good Composition and Place of Text.
9/10.
Thank you for the rating!
RE: dribbble debut post; twitch panels/offline screen - Mister Slyther - Dec 5, 2019
I think this is okay overall.
However, the text doesn't blend in with the Exposure effect that you have done, it looks out of the composition completely. As in, a separate entity.
In my opinion, I would have blended in the text as well.
Edit: This includes the person too.
If you were to blend them in, you'd need to reduce the exposure to make sure the text is readable.
RE: dribbble debut post; twitch panels/offline screen - Herbert - Dec 5, 2019
(Dec 5, 2019 01:05 PM)Mister Slyther Wrote: I think this is okay overall.
However, the text doesn't blend in with the Exposure effect that you have done, it looks out of the composition completely. As in, a separate entity.
In my opinion, I would have blended in the text as well.
Edit: This includes the person too.
If you were to blend them in, you'd need to reduce the exposure to make sure the text is readable.
thanks for the feedback!
RE: dribbble debut post; twitch panels/offline screen - savagepriest - Dec 18, 2019
great work man I like the background
RE: dribbble debut post; twitch panels/offline screen - Herbert - Dec 18, 2019
(Dec 18, 2019 03:44 AM)savagepriest Wrote: great work man I like the background
thank you :)
RE: dribbble debut post; twitch panels/offline screen - MK Sin - Feb 23, 2020
Great work dude I really like it
RE: dribbble debut post; twitch panels/offline screen - Excalibur_Temp1 - Feb 24, 2020
Sick edit, fam. Great work.