Dec 4, 2019 08:06 AM
(This post was last modified: Dec 4, 2019 08:07 AM by Herbert.)
dribbble debut post; twitch panels/offline screen |
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ok let me start with the Exposure fx, i saw it at first, second is the render, i guess it was adjusted to black/white hue, maybe? ok ok this is my breakdown of your work, it is good to see in the eyes.
1. Exposure 2. Black/White on Render 3. Custom Main Text 4. Shadow on a Text maybe 0.5 ~ 1 5. Render was cut out via pentool and refine edge (maybe) 6. Good Composition and Place of Text. 9/10.
Dec 5, 2019 08:50 AM
(This post was last modified: Dec 5, 2019 08:50 AM by Herbert.)
(Dec 5, 2019 07:12 AM)iRazor Wrote: ok let me start with the Exposure fx, i saw it at first, second is the render, i guess it was adjusted to black/white hue, maybe? ok ok this is my breakdown of your work, it is good to see in the eyes. Thank you for the rating!
Dec 5, 2019 01:05 PM
(This post was last modified: Dec 5, 2019 01:07 PM by Mister Slyther.)
I think this is okay overall.
However, the text doesn't blend in with the Exposure effect that you have done, it looks out of the composition completely. As in, a separate entity. In my opinion, I would have blended in the text as well. Edit: This includes the person too. If you were to blend them in, you'd need to reduce the exposure to make sure the text is readable. (Dec 5, 2019 01:05 PM)Mister Slyther Wrote: I think this is okay overall. thanks for the feedback! (Dec 18, 2019 03:44 AM)savagepriest Wrote: great work man I like the background thank you :) |
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