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Poetry [ Within Cage ] - Black D.180109 - Dec 5, 2021
Within Cage
Morning, chirpin' sparrow,
Fly afar, in the vacant sky.
Like lucid star ,
Above me ,
through the ring high,
yet,
Like glowing fly in a jar.
RE: Poetry [ Within Cage ] - wtf - Dec 5, 2021
Damn, this is really really good black!
RE: Poetry [ Within Cage ] - Black D.180109 - Dec 6, 2021
(Dec 5, 2021 11:59 AM)wtf Wrote: Damn, this is really really good black!
Thanks
RE: Poetry [ Within Cage ] - Blockonome - Dec 6, 2021
Happy to read some more, I will definitely be checking out your poems, whenever I will see them on here!
RE: Poetry [ Within Cage ] - 2xTheTap115 - Dec 6, 2021
I'm in awe, buddy, that's pretty good poetics😁✌
RE: Poetry [ Within Cage ] - Orb - Dec 6, 2021
I’m enjoying these. Maybe you could create one thread with all of your poems? Just a suggestion. Would make it easier to read all of them. Keep it up Black.
RE: Poetry [ Within Cage ] - Lrrr - Dec 6, 2021
your poem lacks any structure, it's just a collection of words in an attempt to be thoughtful
RE: Poetry [ Within Cage ] - Black D.180109 - Dec 6, 2021
(Dec 6, 2021 07:29 AM)Дождь Wrote: Happy to read some more, I will definitely be checking out your poems, whenever I will see them on here!
Thanks
(Dec 6, 2021 09:06 AM)2xTheTap115 Wrote: I'm in awe, buddy, that's pretty good poetics😁✌
Thanks
(Dec 6, 2021 09:52 AM)Frsh Wrote: I’m enjoying these. Maybe you could create one thread with all of your poems? Just a suggestion. Would make it easier to read all of them. Keep it up Black.
Thanks. I am going to make one soon
(Dec 6, 2021 06:29 PM)Lrrr Wrote: your poem lacks any structure, it's just a collection of words in an attempt to be thoughtful
Yes its free -style. But I used many poetic devices.
It really gets hard to write in a proper structure.
Thanks.
RE: Poetry [ Within Cage ] - Rahul007rhp - Dec 7, 2021
Keep it up buddy your doing great. Loved your poems
RE: Poetry [ Within Cage ] - Black D.180109 - Dec 7, 2021
(Dec 7, 2021 01:57 AM)Rahul007rhp Wrote: Keep it up buddy your doing great. Loved your poems
Thanks
RE: Poetry [ Within Cage ] - Monero-chan - Dec 7, 2021
Keep up the good poems Black, love them so far.
RE: Poetry [ Within Cage ] - tripleseven - Sep 3, 2022
That was a horrible fucking poem to be honest