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Within Cage
Morning, chirpin' sparrow,
Fly afar, in the vacant sky.
Like lucid star ,
Above me ,
through the ring high,
yet,
Like glowing fly in a jar.
Damn, this is really really good black!
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(Dec 5, 2021 11:59 AM)wtf Wrote: Damn, this is really really good black!
Thanks
Happy to read some more, I will definitely be checking out your poems, whenever I will see them on here!
I'm in awe, buddy, that's pretty good poetics😁✌
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Dec 6, 2021 09:52 AM
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I’m enjoying these. Maybe you could create one thread with all of your poems? Just a suggestion. Would make it easier to read all of them. Keep it up Black.
your poem lacks any structure, it's just a collection of words in an attempt to be thoughtful
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Dec 6, 2021 11:50 PM
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(Dec 6, 2021 07:29 AM)Blockonome Wrote: Happy to read some more, I will definitely be checking out your poems, whenever I will see them on here!
Thanks
(Dec 6, 2021 09:06 AM)2xTheTap115 Wrote: I'm in awe, buddy, that's pretty good poetics😁✌
Thanks
(Dec 6, 2021 09:52 AM)Orb Wrote: I’m enjoying these. Maybe you could create one thread with all of your poems? Just a suggestion. Would make it easier to read all of them. Keep it up Black.
Thanks. I am going to make one soon
(Dec 6, 2021 06:29 PM)Lrrr Wrote: your poem lacks any structure, it's just a collection of words in an attempt to be thoughtful
Yes its free -style. But I used many poetic devices.
It really gets hard to write in a proper structure.
Thanks.
Keep it up buddy your doing great. Loved your poems
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(Dec 7, 2021 01:57 AM)Rahul007rhp Wrote: Keep it up buddy your doing great. Loved your poems
Thanks
Keep up the good poems Black, love them so far.
That was a horrible fucking poem to be honest
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