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Within Cage

Morning, chirpin' sparrow,
Fly afar, in the vacant sky.
Like lucid star ,
Above me ,
through the ring high,
yet,
Like glowing fly in a jar.
Damn, this is really really good black!
(Dec 5, 2021 11:59 AM)wtf Wrote:  Damn, this is really really good black!

Thanks
Happy to read some more, I will definitely be checking out your poems, whenever I will see them on here!

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I'm in awe, buddy, that's pretty good poetics😁✌
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I’m enjoying these. Maybe you could create one thread with all of your poems? Just a suggestion. Would make it easier to read all of them. Keep it up Black.
your poem lacks any structure, it's just a collection of words in an attempt to be thoughtful
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(Dec 6, 2021 07:29 AM)Blockonome Wrote:  Happy to read some more, I will definitely be checking out your poems, whenever I will see them on here!

Thanks


(Dec 6, 2021 09:06 AM)2xTheTap115 Wrote:  I'm in awe, buddy, that's pretty good poetics😁✌

Thanks


(Dec 6, 2021 09:52 AM)Orb Wrote:  I’m enjoying these. Maybe you could create one thread with all of your poems? Just a suggestion. Would make it easier to read all of them. Keep it up Black.

Thanks. I am going to make one soon


(Dec 6, 2021 06:29 PM)Lrrr Wrote:  your poem lacks any structure, it's just a collection of words in an attempt to be thoughtful

Yes its free -style. But I used many poetic devices.
It really gets hard to write in a proper structure.
Thanks.
Keep it up buddy your doing great. Loved your poems
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(Dec 7, 2021 01:57 AM)Rahul007rhp Wrote:  Keep it up buddy your doing great. Loved your poems

Thanks
Keep up the good poems Black, love them so far.
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That was a horrible fucking poem to be honest


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