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Looks very good my friend,
sorry but I only don't like the girl.
8/10
The vector looks okay but you randomly added light spots where there should be shadows, and it fucks up the whole piece. The background is also very meh.
Overall it was good, but you need to work on the key things such as shading.
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There is, as mentioned, some refining touches that is required for the shading, but I feel like you happen to have a pretty good understanding when it comes to drawing out the actual work; I like it.

When that is said, I'd imagine that the vector would be much better off in a completely new-though environment, as the whole city silhouette combined with the background (is it a picture of the floor?) leaves an odd expression.

6/10 for nailing the actual vector :)
thanks for the comments guys , i really appreciate it .

i updated the design
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This is one of the best i've seen in this section so far 10/10
Great job. Best vector person I've seen in this section. but as posted above, work on the shadowing. (I have issues with it as well.)
Looks pretty cool m8, 4.5/10
9/10 mate just keep doing more and more you will become way better .
Updated design is better. 9/10.
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Looks very very cool! Now is about 7/10


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