Apr 10, 2016 10:07 PM
(This post was last modified: Apr 10, 2016 10:10 PM by Allison Argent.)
Here's My Attempt:
The night had started and I was invited to a house party, "Never had I been before." Said Tom.
The music was pleasant the people were drinking and socializing, life seemed like it was finally changing for me, no one knew me here so I could portrait myself as anyone I wanted to be & without a second thought I grab myself a Beer from within the cooler.. Cold and refreshing It was, as I opened the bottle to take a gulp my throat felt the soothing backdrop of the alcohol as it grasped my taste-buds with such a unique taste.
This party wasn't at all bad, I decided to keep drinking and met an abundance of new guys and girls (even exchanged numbers with a few) I felt like I was fitting in with the crowd and everyone enjoyed my humor and conversation, it was until later when I caught eyes with this girl.... It was an extraordinary red dress in which wondered into the room and as I looked she swayed her hair from the side as if she was above everyone had fallen into a crater and was dusting herself off...
Who Is this girl I wonder? No way a guy would leave a girl like that all alone... surely am I right? "Tom Questioned". Time passed and I finally decided It was time for me to finish my night here.. as I was leaving I felt a slight hand breeze against my shoulder as if to keep me in, I slowly turn to see it's her... the girl in the red dress... (End)
Why did I get removed, if I may ask??
(Apr 11, 2016 04:35 AM)Obli Wrote: Why did I get removed, if I may ask??
You were never accepted, and you inserted yourself into the lesson. Apply if you would like, but you were never a part of the sector.
Remember Me as you go by
As you are now so once was I
As I am now so shall you be,
Prepare yourself to follow me
(Apr 11, 2016 09:38 AM)ZerFallen Wrote: You were never accepted, and you inserted yourself into the lesson. Apply if you would like, but you were never a part of the sector.
I was literally added to the group after I posted an application for the Writing section.
I submitted my application here:
https://hackforums.net/showthread.php?ti...id50511577
Shortly later on, I was accepted in the group since I literally posted IN THE GROUP SF AND COMPLETED A TASK I HAD TO COMPLETE BASED ON WHAT I SUBMITTED AND GOT ACCEPTED FOR, supposedly, that only made sense.
(Apr 11, 2016 11:18 AM)Obli Wrote: I was literally added to the group after I posted an application for the Writing section.
I submitted my application here:
https://hackforums.net/showthread.php?ti...id50511577
Shortly later on, I was accepted in the group since I literally posted IN THE GROUP SF AND COMPLETED A TASK I HAD TO COMPLETE BASED ON WHAT I SUBMITTED AND GOT ACCEPTED FOR, supposedly, that only made sense.
So some people have been accepted?
I thought OP said he hasn't looked them over, cause Im still waiting on some corrections
(Apr 11, 2016 11:18 AM)Obli Wrote: I was literally added to the group after I posted an application for the Writing section.
I submitted my application here:
https://hackforums.net/showthread.php?ti...id50511577
Shortly later on, I was accepted in the group since I literally posted IN THE GROUP SF AND COMPLETED A TASK I HAD TO COMPLETE BASED ON WHAT I SUBMITTED AND GOT ACCEPTED FOR, supposedly, that only made sense.
I never accepted you to the writing sector. You must have been added for another reason. Sorry, but you're not a part of this process.
Remember Me as you go by
As you are now so once was I
As I am now so shall you be,
Prepare yourself to follow me
DO NOT DEAL WITH THIS MEMBER
I made an app for this group but im not really the best with puncuation just wondering if puncuation is a big thing needed to get into this group.
(Apr 11, 2016 01:49 PM)Audi0 Wrote: I made an app for this group but im not really the best with puncuation just wondering if puncuation is a big thing needed to get into this group.
You need a basic understanding of English grammar. It doesn't have to be perfect.
Remember Me as you go by
As you are now so once was I
As I am now so shall you be,
Prepare yourself to follow me
DO NOT DEAL WITH THIS MEMBER
(Apr 11, 2016 01:58 PM)ZerFallen Wrote: You need a basic understanding of English grammar. It doesn't have to be perfect.
My grammar is good just my punctuation is not that great
(Apr 11, 2016 01:58 PM)ZerFallen Wrote: You need a basic understanding of English grammar. It doesn't have to be perfect.
I guess I have that, since I am living in Spain I have to take a mandatory English Class. Never knew what phrases verbs were until then.
Hey, I thought I posted my test in this thread? Why did I get kicked out? 😭
(Apr 11, 2016 01:46 PM)ZerFallen Wrote: I never accepted you to the writing sector. You must have been added for another reason. Sorry, but you're not a part of this process.
But you're not an actual leader of the group, you're a sector leader, Icarus.
If I'm added by a leader after I post an app for the Writing Sector it only makes sense for me to participate in there.
Way to go on the level of management if you guys just remove people out of the blue after adding them for more than obvious reasons.
I should mention that I am a published author maybe that will help my chances
(Apr 12, 2016 12:48 AM)wander is a multi dwc Wrote: Hey, I thought I posted my test in this thread? Why did I get kicked out? 😭
You left Dawn and I came to the realization that it would be impossible to run this course solely through a Skype group. Sorry pal. ✌
Remember Me as you go by
As you are now so once was I
As I am now so shall you be,
Prepare yourself to follow me
Apr 12, 2016 02:47 PM
(This post was last modified: Apr 12, 2016 02:47 PM by SIM-2848947.)
(Apr 11, 2016 02:09 PM)Audi0 Wrote: My grammar is good just my punctuation is not that great
My eyes just began to bleed...
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