I'm Chris, hope i'm dealing w/you on skype
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(Mar 25, 2017 04:53 PM)31c6fe2dd1 Wrote: I can confirm it was indeed my skype and your assignment is well underway.I need some high quality writings, can you do it?
Got an 85% on the essay he did for me.
The criticism that the paper got was: 1. Too much quoting from sources, should paraphrase more 2. The intro sentence focused on 1 term when the paper was about 2 terms. It was hard for the grader to understand what the paper was about. Using both terms in the topic sentence helps the reader know what's going to be in the rest of the essay. 3. To end the paper, you should have connected the main ideas from both terms to finalize the paper. Instead it ended really abruptly. 4. The paper really stressed on connecting both terms together, but the entire paper's structure seemed to be separate from each other. 5. Grader was really distracted by the way you used quotes. You would say stuff like "On page xxxx of_ reading it said" when you could just use the quote and cite it (MLA format) Overall even though it seems like there is a ton of criticism, the overall writing was clear and the info was explained correctly for the most part. I'm happy with the 85. |
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