[pabe]

Letter and background styles are looking nice to me. As a whole it reminds me of an introduction to space ship game I played in the past. I'm really lacking some kind of dominance in the picture, your well organized letters are somehow overwhelmed by the size of the image and easily made space between important parts. Give it some kind of uniqueness.

[Vernet]

Looks very fine, but I think you could use another font for the letters, but keep up the good work.