[Seer]

why is everything red? would look much better with more white. also shading is really bad. text needs work, but ok job.

[FredLeague]

Hi, here's what I think you can work on.

Things you did well:
- The idea. I like the idea, and I think it would look really cool if you fix the flaws.
- The shading. It's nice you tried to create some depth into the image.

What you can work on:
- The lines look jagged, as if you filled it with bucket tool. Try using Illustrator for vector type logos. (Illustrator might seem intimidating, but is easy to use once you know your way around the tools).
- The text. The text looks cramped up in it's (small) space, try using a different font or increasing the box size.

Keep it up, you'll improve a lot 🙂

[Caade]

Use the pentool not the brush tool

[PSITICO]

I think need other colours, or more coulurs man, light gray with dark red will be better, well done :D 7/10

[abmenzel]

That text needs a lot of work.. And the colors are off aswell, the shapes are okay though.