(Feb 12, 2013 11:44 PM)Yellows Wrote: The grammatical errors were more visible than normal, mostly in the Headlines section, however. Likely because it was rushed and not proofread?
Thanks for pumping it out.
LEAVE NATHA ALONE TROLL
But yeah :D
WiFi. was banned for harrassing members.
Only those who have upgraded themselfs.
(Feb 12, 2013 11:44 PM)Yellows Wrote: The grammatical errors were more visible than normal, mostly in the Headlines section, however. Likely because it was rushed and not proofread?
Thanks for pumping it out.
I noticed that as well. I'm pretty sure the headlines weren't proofread and were done last minute.
Nice edition, good job.
Keep up the work mate.
(Feb 12, 2013 11:44 PM)Yellows Wrote: The grammatical errors were more visible than normal, mostly in the Headlines section, however. Likely because it was rushed and not proofread?
Thanks for pumping it out. Correct. Our proofreader wasn't online and I am currently on my phone about to fall asleep.
glares at Tibby
Awesome edition, Hf news team!
I especially enjoyed the interview, this is only the 3rd time I have held an interview so close to my heart.
Thank you, Dan for such kind words, you are greatly adored and thought of as an amazing friend.
And although this part made me sad:
Quote:+Entity: How would we know if anything happened to our lovable Aeon? :c
Aeon ‹3: You would see me go offline for months. I talk to a couple people from here regularly when I get the chance, so they would be the first to know.
I know you will make it home safely, as I ask for this everyday.
Well done on the interview +Entity, thank you to you as well.
I just want to clarify I was not intending to bash the writer who composed the Headlines section, in this case Natha. I was speaking with Sir earlier and was informed he may have to write it.
You had just a few hours to mess around with it. No worries.
Mr Kewl is no longer a leader of The Angels. I am a leader of the group now.
Nice edition and welcome to the team Natha. Hope you enjoy your stay in the writ3rs.
Another great edition a big thank you to Sir and his staff. 👍
(Feb 12, 2013 11:50 PM)Oak Wrote: Correct. Our proofreader wasn't online and I am currently on my phone about to fall asleep.
*glares at Tibby*
Go to bed noob, before I come bully you! 😑
Thanks Dan for the shoutouts xD
Another great read, well done Sir and team.
I really wish someone else did the user news. Whoever is doing it doesn't seem to have enough time to pay closer attention to detail.
I loved the interviews this week.
Great edition as per usual. Nice one.
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This was definitely interesting of a read. I would like a little meat in some sections though. Preferably the user news though :P
Feb 13, 2013 01:09 AM
(This post was last modified: Feb 13, 2013 01:09 AM by RDCA.)
Nice to see more info in the headlines, though it was hard to read. While I am not one usually to complain about grammar, and things of that nature as I know mine is far from perfect, I feel as if the grammar was actually something to complain about here. It's nice to have more info, as I previously said, but without good diction and phrasing it becomes cumbersome to read. Just some advise for next time.
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