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So I'm in need of money so I decided to sell Swegway Boards in my country. I made a simple website and was wondering what you guys think about it. The background picture is not finished. I just didn't have a good idea for a background picture since everything on the internet was low quality. This is my first website ever and english is not my main language. ( Please correct my mistakes! )
Would be cool to hear you guys opinions.
Link: Swegway-Boards . com
Please do not assume this for advetising. If you guys think so I will remove this post instantly!
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and lol when i click it i want more info not a payment screen in my fake
Try to make the site look more official and trustworthy.
Looks pretty good.
I suggest you find a couple of videos of people riding these, then edit them together with cheesy music
No text, no captions, only a link at the end of the video to the website
Then put it near the bottom of the page on your site
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(Sep 13, 2015 06:12 AM)Punisher Wrote: Looks pretty good.
I suggest you find a couple of videos of people riding these, then edit them together with cheesy music
No text, no captions, only a link at the end of the video to the website
Then put it near the bottom of the page on your site
Thanks for the feedback!, I'm getting mine soon, than I will make some cool shots. Do you have any idea for a background?
Thanks!
People go straight to paypal after clicking their product, is the information page(adress, name etc) still getting worked on or is this just a scam site??
I don't know about other people but I went to Amazon to buy one.
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I don't middleman any deals on- or off-site. Please don't message me requesting my past services and certainly don't fall for anybody who claims to be me.
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I like how simple and direct it is, like how clicking on a board takes you right to the paypal payment page but some other people might find that sketchy.
the header could use some work, small logo and such.
also if you want to make money you have to add value to a product.
currently your site adds no value for visitors.
give some info, an exclusive deal or try to get attention via other (creative) means.
(Sep 23, 2015 03:16 PM)Sommmen Wrote: the header could use some work, small logo and such.
also if you want to make money you have to add value to a product.
currently your site adds no value for visitors.
give some info, an exclusive deal or try to get attention via other (creative) means.
Agreed, the logo looks tiny on my PC and very tiny on my phone. Also, I think the biggest thing is replace the header image (currently the city which looks like the theme's stock image) with something related to these boards.
What you really need are product pages, so when I click on the links to the boards right below the header, I am taken to a page with the product details, not a payment page. Also, add some links to the top menu, What Is A Swegway? Videos, About Us, Contact, etc. This will massively help credibility.
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