[La Manifesto]

Any advice or suggestions are much obliged.

http://www.clipular.com/c/62527031062036...7K3TgG5xRI

[prada ⠀]

the hierarchy in the bottom portion is struggling a whole lot

also not feeling this color scheme

[SIM-2908357]

the hierarchy in the bottom portion is struggling a whole lot

also not feeling this color scheme

I'll have to agree with both points prada made.
The design doesn't feel right, and the color scheme + bottom portion highly contribute to that feeling.

[La Manifesto]

the hierarchy in the bottom portion is struggling a whole lot

also not feeling this color scheme

The scaffolding in the contact section?

[prada ⠀]

The scaffolding in the contact section?

yes, and the more i look at it the smaller it gets

also u have issues in the portfolio type

the whole thing is pretty inconsistent if im being honest

[La Manifesto]

yes, and the more i look at it the smaller it gets

also u have issues in the portfolio type

the whole thing is pretty inconsistent if im being honest

Do you have any suggestions on how to improve it?

[prada ⠀]

Do you have any suggestions on how to improve it?

sure

set a consistent type strategy and stick to it

[Intern]

I have to agree with many of the others on here , if I had to put you in the right direction first it would be to find a color scheme.

Then honestly where the "skills" section is the slant is really hard on the eyes , if you want to keep it just tone it down a lil bit bud.

Otherwise you're on the right track , you seem knowledgeable about this whole concept and I hope you don't take the criticism to heart buddy 🤝

[La Manifesto]

I have to agree with many of the others on here , if I had to put you in the right direction first it would be to find a color scheme.

Then honestly where the "skills" section is the slant is really hard on the eyes , if you want to keep it just tone it down a lil bit bud.

Otherwise you're on the right track , you seem knowledgeable about this whole concept and I hope you don't take the criticism to heart buddy 🤝

I appreciate the feedback! 🤝

[ΞLIXIЯ]

God, it's sexy as hell! The only thing I can critique is the color of the contact text boxes at the bottom. I don't like white text boxes on a dark background, but it's personal preference. Try this color, if you want #4F5553

9.5/10

[CJacko]

In my opinion, you don't need a whole section just for "about".

The skills could have %'s on them or 10/10 ratings or 100/100

Portfolio should just be a gallery of images without text, they only need a title.

[Wiencej hajsu]

Care when dealing with that member.
He is scammer

[NieR]

While I understand the simplicity that is implied, I feel as if the overall look feels too empty because of the heavy blank space on the sides. It presents itself very well due to how straightforward the design is and it's central alignment, but when I look at the design and descend I'm asking myself why is there a need for the empty space. Consider using subtle textures or if you don't want to go that route I would simply enlarge certain parts of the palettes (this may require some extra work).

And yeah, like other people have said you need to come up with a color scheme as the transitions from each palette are inconsistent especially since black is used twice.