[Classic™]

I'm not publishing this anytime soon or advertising the service, this was just for future things and some experience for me.

[LeetPotato]

You're not going to get hired if you don't check your work.


>DESGINS

[Upset]

Good work really clean, would just fix the spelling error and your good :) 7/10

[SavageAF]

You're not going to get hired if you don't check your work.


>DESGINS

I'm ded pls no more the savagery

[Classic™]

You're not going to get hired if you don't check your work.


>DESGINS

woops it was late 😭

[98329101-41201]

Like the others have pointed out, "Designs" is misspelled, always important to look over and check your work.
This design is reflecting your quality as a designer and a person, it's important that it doesn't have something so simple as grammar errors.

My biggest issue is how boring this "Design" is, basically just text and a couple images.
It's not presenting anything amazing that makes me think you know what you're doing, I wouldn't look at this and go "Oh they're good", I'd look at it and go "Oh, this is how they advertise themselves huh. Kinda plain and boring, not really what I'm looking for." and that's how you hurt yourself by not taking more creative liberties.

I'm certainly not saying to over-stuff this design with lights and all sorts of effects, but it's so plain and boring that you're only going to hurt business for yourself.
The other issue I have is how the service works, you have a small number pyramid that says "1-2-3-", but the process underneath it doesn't relate to that design at all, it's misleading.

For accepted payment methods it's just a Paypal symbol, you'd be leaving users to assume that's all you take and you're not being clear with your customers.
That's only going to make things more difficult for you later down the line, you need to make sure your potential customers are very informed, don't leave it up to a single image.

I'd cut the letter with your UID out and make that a separate image that's hyperlinked to message you with a pre-written header, better touch.

Currently I'd rate it a 4/10, nothing special about it and I see a few issues that need to be resolved.

Find a way to make the design pop and you'll attract more customers.
You should also create a showcase of all your previous work somewhere in there, show people what you can do.

For how the transaction and work goes, I'd make the numbers horizontal instead of a pyramid "1 - 2 - 3 " and add dashes between "We discuss a price." - "You pay me." - "I deliver!", that way the flow of the design matches.

I'd add a section for accepted payment methods and consider adding Bitcoin as well.
I'm aware this isn't a real thread design for advertising, but that's how it has to be examined if you want to improve.

Fix a few things and it could be 6/10, but it'll never be any higher until you add some more life into this design, modern and simple can be great, but this is just simple and plain.

[Classic™]

Like the others have pointed out, "Designs" is misspelled, always important to look over and check your work.
This design is reflecting your quality as a designer and a person, it's important that it doesn't have something so simple as grammar errors.

My biggest issue is how boring this "Design" is, basically just text and a couple images.
It's not presenting anything amazing that makes me think you know what you're doing, I wouldn't look at this and go "Oh they're good", I'd look at it and go "Oh, this is how they advertise themselves huh. Kinda plain and boring, not really what I'm looking for." and that's how you hurt yourself by not taking more creative liberties.

I'm certainly not saying to over-stuff this design with lights and all sorts of effects, but it's so plain and boring that you're only going to hurt business for yourself.
The other issue I have is how the service works, you have a small number pyramid that says "1-2-3-", but the process underneath it doesn't relate to that design at all, it's misleading.

For accepted payment methods it's just a Paypal symbol, you'd be leaving users to assume that's all you take and you're not being clear with your customers.
That's only going to make things more difficult for you later down the line, you need to make sure your potential customers are very informed, don't leave it up to a single image.

I'd cut the letter with your UID out and make that a separate image that's hyperlinked to message you with a pre-written header, better touch.

Currently I'd rate it a 4/10, nothing special about it and I see a few issues that need to be resolved.

Find a way to make the design pop and you'll attract more customers.
You should also create a showcase of all your previous work somewhere in there, show people what you can do.

For how the transaction and work goes, I'd make the numbers horizontal instead of a pyramid "1 - 2 - 3 " and add dashes between "We discuss a price." - "You pay me." - "I deliver!", that way the flow of the design matches.

I'd add a section for accepted payment methods and consider adding Bitcoin as well.
I'm aware this isn't a real thread design for advertising, but that's how it has to be examined if you want to improve.

Fix a few things and it could be 6/10, but it'll never be any higher until you add some more life into this design, modern and simple can be great, but this is just simple and plain.

Thank you for actual help, I'll keep this in mind when I do a design next time.

Thanks a lot.