[Mαxim]

One thread design a month keeps the doctors away. No but seriously, used to run a service not so long time ago and now am doing like a thread design per month.
Feel free to let me know what you would have done different. The guy who ordered it seemed happy with it and is using it atm.

New-ish version - Will make another version once I find more time. Will work after the feedback i got: (Click to View)

[Finn.]

Overall it's pretty dope, but I think that this part doesn't fit in:



Place them under the prices with blue logos that would look a lot better.

[SIM-2875347]

Overall it's pretty dope, but I think that this part doesn't fit in:

That's exactly what I was going to say, it should be centered a bit better in that section. Also perhaps change it from white to a color that matches better.

Looks pretty nice otherwise, the animated top text is a nice touch.

[Mαxim]

Overall it's pretty dope, but I think that this part doesn't fit in:

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Place them under the prices with blue logos that would look a lot better.

I agree, now when you say it. It doesn't feel like it's a part of the thread design. Thanks, will move it to where Buildoman recommended.

[Intern]

Great stuff Maxim,

The only issue I find with this currently is maybe the speed of the intro :o - and just that little thing everyone mentioned above :)

Best,

[AvessoVision]

I'm a fan of animated elements on websites, such as buttons that move, shift, image panels that rotate and all those things that makes the user have a smooth experience.
Although this being a thread design and obviously not having full control over the elements engaged into animations, I feel like they don't let me focus on a subject due to the fading/repeating effect. If only you had full control over it.

I would've made a hover over the icons with a sleek dropdown on it. But since it's nothing more but a gif/thread presentation, I feel that being static would look better, but that's just me. If the client is satisfied that's all that matters.

Nonetheless the whole design is minimalistic and semi-flat which I really like. Great main color pick.
Although there's a really low opacity background with dollar bills in there that you can barely notice and it looks more like a grunge texture of some sorts.

You should definitely pump out more of these and not once a month. You can improve by a lot if you love doing it.

[SkullTraill]

Nice, timeless design.

The only things I can think to suggest are add some easing/animation beziers to the bouncing animation to make it look smoother/more organic (if you did the animations in After Effects, which I would infinitely recommend over photoshop).

Also I feel like the kerning and general typography (the spacing, fonts, and font size variations) could be improved on a little bit. However I'm not an expert on that so I can't give exact advice, except for one thing. It seems like on the first block of text (the animated one) you've set the font to justified. I'd only recommend using justified text in large paragraphs/blocks of text. For a small block of text, the variations in spaces between words can look a little weird.

Also try incorporating some subtle patterns/textures. IDK about you but they give me a hard on :D

[SalesScape]

What software did you make this with ?

Bet it took a while to do the animations :D very decent dude i like alot

How much do you charge for these? reckon you could get 50$ easy to the right people

[Mαxim]

Lots of awesome feedback, i appreciate it a lot and will make edits accordingly. Will reply later!

Didn't expect it, at all.

<3

[Changement]

It looks good my friend! I wish i would learn how to do thread designs aswell haha.
Grymt jobbat!

[Riyu]

Oh, look the thread design you made me lol.

Thanks, Maxim.

[VirtualVendag]

Really cool thread design, 10/10

[Sikes]

everything looks really good other than the payment methods

[1MPERATOR]

Those 4 paymentmethods (paypal etc.) .. sorry.. ugly as fuck..

Everything else is sick

[Mαxim]

Great stuff Maxim,

The only issue I find with this currently is maybe the speed of the intro :o - and just that little thing everyone mentioned above :)

Best,

Yeah i decided to change it now to something smoother. I felt that it was too distracting. Thanks!

I'm a fan of animated elements on websites, such as buttons that move, shift, image panels that rotate and all those things that makes the user have a smooth experience.
Although this being a thread design and obviously not having full control over the elements engaged into animations, I feel like they don't let me focus on a subject due to the fading/repeating effect. If only you had full control over it.

I would've made a hover over the icons with a sleek dropdown on it. But since it's nothing more but a gif/thread presentation, I feel that being static would look better, but that's just me. If the client is satisfied that's all that matters.

Nonetheless the whole design is minimalistic and semi-flat which I really like. Great main color pick.
Although there's a really low opacity background with dollar bills in there that you can barely notice and it looks more like a grunge texture of some sorts.

You should definitely pump out more of these and not once a month. You can improve by a lot if you love doing it.

I agree, would love to have more control over the animations.

Will try to look into the low-opacity background. Might change it entirely. But thanks Avesso, really great feedback.

Nice, timeless design.

The only things I can think to suggest are add some easing/animation beziers to the bouncing animation to make it look smoother/more organic (if you did the animations in After Effects, which I would infinitely recommend over photoshop).

Also I feel like the kerning and general typography (the spacing, fonts, and font size variations) could be improved on a little bit. However I'm not an expert on that so I can't give exact advice, except for one thing. It seems like on the first block of text (the animated one) you've set the font to justified. I'd only recommend using justified text in large paragraphs/blocks of text. For a small block of text, the variations in spaces between words can look a little weird.

Also try incorporating some subtle patterns/textures. IDK about you but they give me a hard on :D

I fixed the justified part now, looks better, indeed.

Yeah I agree that the spacing, fonts and size variations could be improved a bit, I guess that it has to do with me lacking some basics when it comes to graphics design.

Will see what I can find with patterns, i love them as well. SoldierX is particularly good with patterns and such.

Thanks <3

What software did you make this with ?

Bet it took a while to do the animations :D very decent dude i like alot

How much do you charge for these? reckon you could get 50$ easy to the right people

Photoshop combined with After Effects (for the animations).

How much i charge varies.

It looks good my friend! I wish i would learn how to do thread designs aswell haha.
Grymt jobbat!

Haha but you know dem animations. I would love to see a thread design from you, I can't imagine how it would looks with your skills. Let me know if you ever make one. 🤝

everything looks really good other than the payment methods

Fixed! Thanks. And I agree, those payment methods. Bad spot. I wiped them off the surface.

Those 4 paymentmethods (paypal etc.) .. sorry.. ugly as fuck..

Everything else is sick

Done deal, as i said above. Agreed.

New version-ish (will work more after the feedback i received once i find a minute <3):

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