[Lukas]

view the full version here:
fortnite homepage redesign

[img]http://superstudent.co/images/fortnite.jpg[/img]

little shit don't mention bothering:
top button is too bright of an orange
the left side of the outline surrounding the video is smaller than the left side (idk why, and still don't)
play button looks too dark and/or grainy

everything else, go for it

thanks

[MagikMindFreak]

Looks good to me! Nice job! :) Am impressed

[Payload]

Look's pretty good but imho the footer looks like you didn't even try.

[DeminishedK]

Looks great, but i've noticed all of your designs have a theme or pattern to them. You should try to diversify them a bit. Still, the new homepage would look fantastic for fortnite!

[Lukas]

Looks good to me! Nice job! :) Am impressed

thank you

Looks great, but i've noticed all of your designs have a theme or pattern to them. You should try to diversify them a bit. Still, the new homepage would look fantastic for fortnite!

thanks you, and yea, i just wanted to belt out something so i wouldn't get too rusty, lol. i plan on being advantageous next design

Look's pretty good but imho the footer looks like you didn't even try.

thanks & what would you like for me to do w/ the footer lol

[Goku‌‌‌‌]

That's awesome dude! love it.

[Payload]

thanks & what would you like for me to do w/ the footer lol

No problem & idk traditional footers usually have menus and links so people don't have to scroll up. The copyright notice being prominent just seems out of place and i'm not a fan of the padding.

I like everything above the footer, not trying to hate just giving my feedback / opinion. I'm sure you can find things on my site you don't like or agree with.

[Mister Slyther]

Looks mediocre and has a general layout to it.

As a UI Designer I wouldn't say im particularly impressed, but what I can say is it looks alright.

A few visual problems I'd like to say are:

- Your buttons are small and the text is big. The button is meant to be big and the text inside smaller, it looks really strange the way it is at the moment. Increase the size of your buttons in terms of width and height, and decrease the font-size.
- Footer can be improved, looks bland, add more color, add more texture...
- The background image you should fade it into the black background color instead of it leaving it like a full on rectangle as it is.

This concept needs to be more vivid and eye appealing.

Overall 5/10

Hope I didn't come out mean and offensive Lukas, i'd rather be honest so I can actually help you improve. 

[Lukas]

No problem & idk traditional footers usually have menus and links so people don't have to scroll up. The copyright notice being prominent just seems out of place and i'm not a fan of the padding.

I like everything above the footer, not trying to hate just giving my feedback / opinion. I'm sure you can find things on my site you don't like or agree with.

na, no disrespect meant, i appreciate all feedback

i probably could've done something flashy, but i ended up finishing this at like 1 or 2 in the morning and just wanted nothing else to do with it

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Looks mediocre and has a general layout to it.

As a UI Designer I wouldn't say im particularly impressed, but what I can say is it looks alright.

A few visual problems I'd like to say are:

- Your buttons are small and the text is big. The button is meant to be big and the text inside smaller, it looks really strange the way it is at the moment. Increase the size of your buttons in terms of width and height, and decrease the font-size.
- Footer can be improved, looks bland, add more color, add more texture...
- The background image you should fade it into the black background color instead of it leaving it like a full on rectangle as it is.

This concept needs to be more vivid and eye appealing.

Overall 5/10

thx

[oRequiem]

Very impressive.
Looks extremely clean my dude. Amazing job 10/10 for sure.

[Billie Joe]

Very impressive.
Looks extremely clean my dude. Amazing job 10/10 for sure.

[Jellynator]

This really looks awesome. Great work you did here especially with that color scheme